Clarity Remix. First track advice please

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CasualSaturday
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Clarity Remix. First track advice please

Post by CasualSaturday » Fri Feb 21, 2014 9:44 pm

This is my first track so it might pretty rough. Being a total n00b, I'm just happy to have something that even remotely resembles a complete song. Let me know what you like about it and especially what you don't like about it. All criticism is welcome, constructive or not. I'll take anything I can get from the more experienced ears here. :W:
Oh, and let me know if the vocals sound obnoxious. I'm kind of on the fence about that.

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InfinityMan
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Re: Clarity Remix. First track advice please

Post by InfinityMan » Sat Feb 22, 2014 5:26 pm

The vocals sound great. For A first song, that was really good. Try to add some variations to spice it up a bit. Other than that keep up the good work.

CasualSaturday
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Re: Clarity Remix. First track advice please

Post by CasualSaturday » Sat Feb 22, 2014 6:03 pm

Cool, Thanks man!

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