Iilti - Mangled (140)

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IIlIIl
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Iilti - Mangled (140)

Post by IIlIIl » Sun Mar 16, 2014 3:35 pm

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Feedback and comments welcome.

Thanks.

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Re: Iilti - Mangled (140)

Post by hiv3Mind » Sun Mar 16, 2014 3:41 pm

nice track, you could try to work on the mastering to get a clearer sound, but i like the arrangement

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Re: Iilti - Mangled (140)

Post by smoothcriminal12 » Sun Mar 16, 2014 3:42 pm

Nice, very nice track. Love the bass and drop, very nice groove going on. However, I did feel that the track was a bit too repetitive and I would've liked to see more development in the track. I wouldn't take that to heart though, I'm quite critical. It was great! Great work!

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Re: Iilti - Mangled (140)

Post by IIlIIl » Sun Mar 16, 2014 3:50 pm

Thanks for feedback.
Hey smoothcriminal, I checked your posts and found one post that had your song Unstable. That track is just... wow. Any chance of getting a .wav or 320? Really would want to play that out. Holy mole what a track.

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Re: Iilti - Mangled (140)

Post by IIlIIl » Sun Mar 16, 2014 10:31 pm

Edited the track quite a bit and bumping this.

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Re: Iilti - Mangled (140)

Post by skins345669 » Sun Mar 16, 2014 10:47 pm

Some nice sounds in here, but I see what people mean about it being repetitive. I think you could get round this by using longer patterns with more variation, i.e. base your hi hats and kicks around 8 bar patterns with a bit of variation in where the hits are.

That being said, you've got that stomping dread feel down, which I think is what you were going for.

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Re: Iilti - Mangled (140)

Post by particle-jim » Mon Mar 17, 2014 4:38 pm

yes bruv, this one goes in!
imami wrote:i put secret donks in all my tunes, just low enough so you can't hear them
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Re: Iilti - Mangled (140)

Post by andyyhitscar » Mon Mar 17, 2014 4:49 pm

do something more with that deep bass like some variation or cut away, this is like the millionth time I've heard something like this on this forum

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Re: Iilti - Mangled (140)

Post by IIlIIl » Mon Mar 17, 2014 5:12 pm

Sorry for not pleasing you!

PEACE!

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Re: Iilti - Mangled (140)

Post by andyyhitscar » Mon Mar 17, 2014 6:02 pm

Ahh cmon man you didn't have to take down the song

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Re: Iilti - Mangled (140)

Post by IIlIIl » Mon Mar 17, 2014 7:26 pm

I keep all of my tracks for about 2 days in soundcloud.

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