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TEKN
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by TEKN » Sun Apr 20, 2014 11:47 pm
What's up peoples got something chilled out that I started on today. Still needs a proper mixdown session but would love to hear what you think about it so far
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wehlfest
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by wehlfest » Mon Apr 21, 2014 5:35 am
nice. kinda got a Silkie vibe. Wish I had more constructive criticism. Def want to hear more like this.
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TEKN
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by TEKN » Mon Apr 21, 2014 8:41 am
wehlfest wrote:nice. kinda got a Silkie vibe. Wish I had more constructive criticism. Def want to hear more like this.
Thanks man glad you're feeling it.
Plenty more on the way soon
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AMG
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by AMG » Mon Apr 21, 2014 9:59 pm
Nice groove here. This could benefit more from bringing that snare out a hair. @ 2:17 the bass groove kicks proper. A few added layers as a minimal approach could really add some flavor to your tune. Even expanding that for an extra 20+ seconds have people nodding their head.
I agree with Wehlfest, it reminded me of Silkie's direction. So you've got quite a bit going for you on this one. It's coming along and I like what you've got so far. Thanks for sharing.
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ThisIsSovereign
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by ThisIsSovereign » Tue Apr 22, 2014 12:55 am
Big tune man, basslines were proper and the second drop was a nice mix up with the new bassline. Really felt it overall, like AMG said the only thing I'd maybe say is add in some different minimal atmospheric things in the background to change it up.

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TEKN
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by TEKN » Tue Apr 22, 2014 7:10 am
AMG wrote:Nice groove here. This could benefit more from bringing that snare out a hair. @ 2:17 the bass groove kicks proper. A few added layers as a minimal approach could really add some flavor to your tune. Even expanding that for an extra 20+ seconds have people nodding their head.
I agree with Wehlfest, it reminded me of Silkie's direction. So you've got quite a bit going for you on this one. It's coming along and I like what you've got so far. Thanks for sharing.
ThisIsSovereign wrote:Big tune man, basslines were proper and the second drop was a nice mix up with the new bassline. Really felt it overall, like AMG said the only thing I'd maybe say is add in some different minimal atmospheric things in the background to change it up.

Thanks a lot for the feedback!
I definitely will be adding another group of texture layers when I do the final arrangement/mixdown to fill up the range a bit better, also feel like I can thicken up the bassline a little so it has more presence.
cheers for the suggestions going to put a good session into it this week.
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by kminus1 » Sat Apr 26, 2014 6:04 pm
Liking it. It would be nice to hear another version with vocals added as well.
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