Pegboard Nerds - Hero ( xysaieka remix )Please give feedback

[DarcyHarris]

I made this remix for the contest, but I mainly use them for the learning experience rather than actually going in it to win it sort of thing.

Any who, I have problems. I listen to my records back to back with artists I like in the same sort of scene. I just wonder how their songs and remixes get so much energy and life into it. My songs feel kind of lifeless and just noise for 4 minutes of your life... I'm really trying to find a way to fix this problem but it's really complicated. Was wondering if anyone on the forum would be able to give some feedback on my remix here. It's hard to find people who know what they're doing to point out my errors. I know something's wrong with it but I can't figure it out myself... which is an issue in itself.

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