Sovereign - Haunt [Dubstep]

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Sovereign - Haunt [Dubstep]

Post by ThisIsSovereign » Fri Jul 11, 2014 2:06 am

Easy, just put this track out in the first release of my "Depth Charges" series of releases; which focuses on sub-bass minded tracks. Any feedback is welcome :Q:.

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Re: Sovereign - Haunt [Deep Dubstep]

Post by jrkhnds » Fri Jul 11, 2014 2:20 am

the rain and thunder is a bit too present imho, and I'm not exactly impressed by the way you treated the samples (too upfront, and maybe a bit more decay on the delay?).
else I rate it. I could see myself getting a solid skank on to this tune.



after listening to it a second time, it might just be the mixdown? it's too... bright for my taste.
and just go with "dubstep" - no need for the added "deep". don't let edm push you into a corner.
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Re: Sovereign - Haunt [Deep Dubstep]

Post by Kongret » Fri Jul 11, 2014 5:54 am

Percussion is a bit too dry. Sample use is a bit excessive as was mention before.
Kick and snare are too rough for this atmosphere imo, something softer would do better.
Overall the atmosphere you tried to achieve is certainly there, sounds like nice dark bgm for a game or something like that :)

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Re: Sovereign - Haunt [Deep Dubstep]

Post by jrkhnds » Fri Jul 11, 2014 6:23 am

nah I like the kick. you're right about the snare though; some nice, lively snare à la old Metalheadz or Dillinja would be sick though.
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Re: Sovereign - Haunt [Deep Dubstep]

Post by Soze » Fri Jul 11, 2014 2:36 pm

Nice track, i think its all been said as far as touch ups go.

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Re: Sovereign - Haunt [Deep Dubstep]

Post by ThisIsSovereign » Sun Jul 13, 2014 3:07 am

Safe for the feedback guys, glad you felt the vibes overall :Q:.
Jurkhands wrote:and just go with "dubstep" - no need for the added "deep". don't let edm push you into a corner.
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Re: Sovereign - Haunt [Dubstep]

Post by Hdub_3103 » Tue Aug 05, 2014 7:45 pm

Rating the vibez you've instilled on ur canvess

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Re: Sovereign - Haunt [Dubstep]

Post by jaydot » Wed Aug 06, 2014 10:57 pm

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Re: Sovereign - Haunt [Dubstep]

Post by hirszu » Thu Aug 07, 2014 12:30 am

Great tune, agree about the dry percussion but that's it, just needs a few finishing touches :)

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Re: Sovereign - Haunt [Dubstep]

Post by sleepvessel » Thu Aug 07, 2014 7:38 am

this is dope!, everything sounds polished....well done.

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Re: Sovereign - Haunt [Dubstep]

Post by ThisIsSovereign » Mon Aug 11, 2014 2:10 am

Big ups for checking out the tune guys :W:.

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Re: Sovereign - Haunt [Dubstep]

Post by MissingPluto » Thu Aug 21, 2014 10:14 pm

This is definitely a track i would smoke to. 8) I like the synth too. Its kinda eerie. But a good listen.

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Re: Sovereign - Haunt [Dubstep]

Post by traverse » Fri Aug 22, 2014 3:28 pm

Sounding really sick, everything just feels a little forward right now. Maybe try cutting a lot of the weight out of that lead to make some space.

Real nice ambience though, love the rain sounds. And that flutey bit... Mmmmmm. Great stuff.

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Re: Sovereign - Haunt [Dubstep]

Post by dislokated » Fri Aug 22, 2014 4:40 pm

Nice tune, mate! pretty minimal and deep, as it has to be

In my opnion, I would try to go for a kick that is a bit more agressive, and try to use a snare with heaps of reverb and delay on the background, trying not to make it too in yo face like that.
Liked the storm sounds, give it a nice and dark ambience to it. I would just try to make it a little less present during the main parts. Cool samples as well.

Cheers to that, awesome tune!

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Re: Sovereign - Haunt [Dubstep]

Post by CRoW_Dubstep123 » Wed Aug 27, 2014 6:06 am

really deep i like
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