Bronson Stone - Runout

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chongbottom
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Bronson Stone - Runout

Post by chongbottom » Fri Jul 25, 2014 2:02 pm

new one! let us know what you think

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elyhess
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Re: Bronson Stone - Runout

Post by elyhess » Thu Jul 31, 2014 4:26 am

some variation in the drum pattern would be nice, some offhit snares or something, i also think its a tad bit repetitive, maybe change up the main note pattern or something. cool track, would fit into a set real nicely

EDIT: also maybe a vocal could rock this! I really like your track "cant" wonderful vocal play

Ofbitt
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Re: Bronson Stone - Runout

Post by Ofbitt » Thu Jul 31, 2014 12:08 pm

i like the dub techno kind of chords i as Elyhess said u might try some snare fills or some clap hits with dub delays just to add variation on drums and break out of the Mechanic feel of the track, a vocal will help too addin some conntrast and hel you add some depth to the song still it's a great track i like it
hope that helps thanks!!

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