Feedback For Firepower Submission?

[Kreatur3]

Hey guyssss, Just wondered if you could give me some feedback for this before i send it off to some labels <3 Thank you ^-^

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[emook]

man, i just heard this through haunta. i was like....did this guy post someone elses track? haha. good stuff man.

[Kreatur3]

aha thank you man ^_^

[jaydot]

Mix sounds a little quiet although that could be on my side-basses and leads are on point.Big ups and good luck.

[wub]

Standard brostep isn't my thing so I can't comment on the structure of the track itself. Mixdown wise, however, it sounds perfectly fine. Everything has it's space in the mix and nothing is clashing.

[Think_Dubstep]

def big sounds! great production. Keep making big stuff!

[Banesy]

hahaha...I think if you draw a comment that refers to your stuff sounding like Zomboy, you are getting pretty close. I don't think you are at Firepower level yet. I dig the track composition wise, but the mix needs to be a lot cleaner and punchier. Your kick and snares are getting covered up so it sounds like you mixed everything too high relative to them. Just A/B your track with any Zomboy track and you will hear the difference.

I struggle to hear the main drop parts and I really want them to be more up front. I think your atmospheric and arp backing parts are coming in at equal levels to your main drop riffs where they need to sit behind it just to fill the empty space. I find the arp actually really distracting during your drops.

I think you are really close, don't get lazy and think that you are there yet.....keep working to improve your mixes. Overall, nice work though man. It seems like all of the elements are there but just need to be mixed better.

[Think_Dubstep]

the first 4 measures of the drop, there is this bass thats being overused. i would go back in and at least make another version of the same bass. (pitch down instead of up for instance) then place the new bass between some of the old bass. ask me if you want me to describe exactly the bass im talking about. other than that good track.

[ANTD]

That's definitely a cool track …. good luck

[HigherDose]

pretty good. good luck

[GregLongman]

This is really good man. I love this. Not sure if it's quite Firepower style, but I love the vocal chops and the cute sounds before the drop.

A couple of the basses in the drop could benefit from some EQ separation or some reverb space but that's me being SUPER picky.

Best of luck to you, sir