Mixdown and Placement Feedback Anywub? and... (Experimental)

[Phorsion]

... ...Hello.
I'd like some comments. Like...one from you wub.
I put my rhythm to the test a bit and even though my voice is not good...I still love my voice somehow. At least I have one. How is this, wub?
Soundcloud

[Phorsion]

I'm basically waiting for sinestepper to show up. or maybe wub too.

[CRoW_Dubstep123]

alright direction, keep at it man!

[Phorsion]

Thanks. An alright direction it can seem. If only I could get some...or just a tip on mix or placement.

[Think_Dubstep]

honestly, the placement is ok. Its the mixdown that needs work. For some of your samples, try to glue it more the the track my using a bleed/fade effect option. what daw system are you using?

[wub]

... ...Hello.
I'd like some comments. Like...one from you wub.
I put my rhythm to the test a bit and even though my voice is not good...I still love my voice somehow. At least I have one. How is this, wub?
Soundcloud

Sorry man, took an age to get back to you on this!

Opening drum loop is quite empty with just the kick and snare over the occasional bass sound...would consider either bringing in the elements a bit earlier or else layering something else in there to fill it out a bit.

Likewise, beat itself is very repetitive...kick snare over and over without any real variation. Program a few different patterns so you've got some variation, or else employ a retrigger VST on the drum tracks in the mixer to generate random hits and refills as you go along.

Not a fan of the 8bit sounding synth...sounds a bit like an old computer game loading off top tbh, LOL. Vocal samples are nice, but that synth ~1m10s grates on the ears a little.

Elements aside, I like the arrangement of this. It flows nicely and introduces new bits before things get too dull. I'd almost suggest stripping out the drums altogether and layer in some long pads to make this a full on drone track...as noted above, the randomness of some of the sounds and overall discordant vibe seem to suggest that this isn't necessarily a track that needs drums in it.

[Phorsion]

Thanks wub.

I'm going to reload it as a mech-drone track wub?! Alright, when I research what kind the one without drums is I'll bring it back more awesome than before.

[Phorsion]

https://soundcloud.com/ahmed-khan-115/f ... sion-remix
@ 4:13 drone pad like this wub? And what else is missing that I should put into the remaking? I'll take drums off and deep it with bass?

[Phorsion]

honestly, the placement is ok. Its the mixdown that needs work. For some of your samples, try to glue it more the the track my using a bleed/fade effect option. what daw system are you using?

This was good. I kept those words. "glue it".

[Phorsion]

What happened when I took out the drums and snares and leave some noise... This.
https://soundcloud.com/phorsion/hdbh-drone-remake

What is the drone version supposed to be anyway.

wub.