1st attempt at a dubstep kinda tune tell me what ya think

[coptyk]

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemus ... dID=477533

its at the top and called step 1

[ramadanman]

the organ chords are kinda predictable - i think they play a bit too often as well - needs more space. also that pitched down voice might sound better not pitched down.. if you see what i mean

not sure about the reverb on the kick - makes it a bit muddy

sub is way too low in the mix

one of the hats is panned fully to the left - i wouldnt pan all the way incase people listen on 1 speaker / headphones. sound more natural panned more centrally anyhow.

the bubbly sound thing is quite cool, but i think you use it too often

whaaaaa what is that amen doing! starting to sound like really early jungle now, drifting out the dubstep realms.i think if you're gonna use an amen, use it more subtly. the trouble is also that you lose the space when you just put an amen in like that. there's always something playing, when instead it would be better if there was space for the sub, kick and snare to interact.

[coptyk]

thanks for the comments i made some changes to it and re uploaded it this morning. i turned up the sub, tried to brighen the mix a bit and switched up teh bublly sound for something more synthy