Untitled and Unfinished Song[Brostep]

[dansci]

Hi everyone, i was working on an american style dubstep/brostep song... I decided i may post an unfinished sample so i can get some experienced feedback before i continue working on it. Im planning to release a finished version some time later this month probably under a different name.

I would like to know how i can improve it and if it is decent enough to submit to some dubstep labels(something i doubt).

You can criticize it all you want as long as it contributes to my learning experience(ie; no death threats, brostep hate mail, requests to stop, etc...).

At some point in the future i will reply to the comments and offer some excuse as to why i produced it the way i did.

Have fun.

Thanks

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[dansci]

Bumpity bump bump bump

[crackpot]

some nice synths in here, you have the same problem as me though! too many different sounds. it can be hard deciding what to put in your song, remember there is no harm saving a few sounds for another song.

[dansci]

@Crackpot
Yeah... It's surprising that it's actually a large reduction of sounds since my last and first song attempt. This had 22 tracks with 4x vst. My previous had 38 with 2x vst.

Still looking for some experienced users to roast me on my sound quality and Eqing... Anybody up for the challenge?

[ChrisPlatow]

Personally the song bored me til the drop. Thats a whole minute of a basic build. I say add more to that or shorten it. And ya clearly you have some frequency issues. I think you got too much high highs. Sounds like theyres just white noise playing constantly with the driop. But i think redesigning sounds would help a lot. And also i agree with crackpot. For this song i think there is too many sounds in the drop. Maybe try taking out some sounds and compensating for those missing sounds my making one of the other basses have more movement. It sounds tight when u hear a growl turn into a wobble on a diff part, and then do pitch drops and rises and whatever else you can think to make it do. So like instead of having a diff sound for the pitch drops and a diff one for wobbles and a diff one for growls try to make one sound do more. I thinkk itll mesh everything together more "naturally"