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I think this song has way too much looping. It doesn't evolve. The intro sounds are still intact during the chorus, so I'm guessing these are from a sample/loop pack or something?
if not then I'd change the drum sounds to a live sound. This is just personal preference, but the heavily electronic sound of the kick and snare doesn't suit the acoustics in the intro. Check out this submotion orchestra song to see what i mean and you'll see what i mean about the drums.
I think this song has way too much looping. It doesn't evolve. The intro sounds are still intact during the chorus, so I'm guessing these are from a sample/loop pack or something?
if not then I'd change the drum sounds to a live sound. This is just personal preference, but the heavily electronic sound of the kick and snare doesn't suit the acoustics in the intro. Check out this submotion orchestra song to see what i mean and you'll see what i mean about the drums.
Yeah I noticed not enough variation between the drum patterns too. These are also some samples I found somewhere. Ill keep messing with it, and see if I can get some better structure out of it. My main focus was spent to much on the bass.