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Epinix
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Epinix - Amnesia Groove (Underground)

Post by Epinix » Sat Nov 29, 2014 6:34 pm

Hey guys, tossing out some stuff new to me, any feedback or constructive criticism would be lovely :W:
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A bit of those mysterious wobbles, with some Chill-hop inspired sounds
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Re: Epinix - Amnesia Groove (Underground)

Post by JamesHanvey » Sun Nov 30, 2014 12:34 pm

I think this song has way too much looping. It doesn't evolve. The intro sounds are still intact during the chorus, so I'm guessing these are from a sample/loop pack or something?

if not then I'd change the drum sounds to a live sound. This is just personal preference, but the heavily electronic sound of the kick and snare doesn't suit the acoustics in the intro. Check out this submotion orchestra song to see what i mean and you'll see what i mean about the drums.



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Re: Epinix - Amnesia Groove (Underground)

Post by JamesHanvey » Sun Nov 30, 2014 12:44 pm

I think this song has way too much looping. It doesn't evolve. The intro sounds are still intact during the chorus, so I'm guessing these are from a sample/loop pack or something?

if not then I'd change the drum sounds to a live sound. This is just personal preference, but the heavily electronic sound of the kick and snare doesn't suit the acoustics in the intro. Check out this submotion orchestra song to see what i mean and you'll see what i mean about the drums.



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Re: Epinix - Amnesia Groove (Underground)

Post by Epinix » Sun Nov 30, 2014 5:05 pm

Thanks for the reply man!

Yeah I noticed not enough variation between the drum patterns too. These are also some samples I found somewhere. Ill keep messing with it, and see if I can get some better structure out of it. My main focus was spent to much on the bass.
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Re: Epinix - Amnesia Groove (Underground)

Post by JamesHanvey » Sun Nov 30, 2014 6:01 pm

Okay, post it back up when you've done!

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