trojdan facelift - foxes (garage / bass)

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trojdan facelift - foxes (garage / bass)

Post by ZB » Wed Dec 24, 2014 2:20 am

wrote a tune in a summery girly mood:
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feedback would b cool.
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Re: trojdan facelift - foxes (garage / bass)

Post by NinjaEdit » Wed Dec 24, 2014 7:13 am

The kick and especially the snare are a bit quiet.

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Re: trojdan facelift - foxes (garage / bass)

Post by ZB » Thu Dec 25, 2014 2:44 am

cheers man for pointing out - yeah i noticed that when i put on head phones too so fixed it up. xx

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Re: trojdan facelift - foxes (garage / bass)

Post by CRoW_Dubstep123 » Thu Dec 25, 2014 3:38 am

the mix could use a bit, the brassy phet bass has a peak in the mid range that is just annihilating my headphone, other than that i enjoy the vibes homie, really like the shakers, nice and clean
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Re: trojdan facelift - foxes (garage / bass)

Post by Some_Guy » Fri Dec 26, 2014 11:31 am

very nice vibes man. but i think you could have done more by adding more different sounds. also some panning with the high end stuff might sound nice.
good job and continue :)

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Re: trojdan facelift - foxes (garage / bass)

Post by dpwb » Sat Dec 27, 2014 1:43 am

yeah id say the mix is a little flat. try expanding the stereo spread on stuff like mentions above. also the main flute melody bit needs some more character. maybe try some slight modulation via effects and or automation.

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Re: trojdan facelift - foxes (garage / bass)

Post by dougriley » Tue Dec 30, 2014 5:48 pm

Hah summer girly mood!

Great production man. I like everything. I just feel like each section is drawn out too far. I go from loving the new layer to wishing it would've gone away a few bars back.
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