http://davetaylor13.googlepages.com/Navigate128kbps.mp3
Needs some polishing up but i am happy with the basic frame, feedback appreciated.
New tune....
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not on my proper system for this, but i forsee conflicts with kick and sub - sounds a bit too muddy
the rolls on that type of reverbey snare don't quite work - not crisp enough
1.23 - random appearance of break breaks the flow
i don't think that there's enough variation to sustain my interest in this tune
the rolls on that type of reverbey snare don't quite work - not crisp enough
1.23 - random appearance of break breaks the flow
i don't think that there's enough variation to sustain my interest in this tune
Agree with the above, does need a bit more variation. Think you could hi-pass the kick to keep it out of the range of the sub a bit more, but to be honest I like the percussive melody, the bass has got some nice motion in it, I think the breaks used sparingly enough to not be too intrusive and gives it a nice little occassional kick to proceedings and the rhythm programmings good.
So mostly good from my point of view, keep at it.
P.S. I was so going to rob that sample but you beat me to it
So mostly good from my point of view, keep at it.
P.S. I was so going to rob that sample but you beat me to it
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Good track, but unable to give you any worth while critical feed back regarding the bass as im listening on a laptop ie no bass, could do with a little variation but don't over do it.
How are do you allow people to down load your tunes? have you got them on a site or something? I woild like to do the same but lacking the know how, any help would be great
Tim
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How are do you allow people to down load your tunes? have you got them on a site or something? I woild like to do the same but lacking the know how, any help would be great
Tim
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