first attempt

warren888k · Post by **warren888k** » Sun Mar 09, 2008 12:08 pm

new track on myspace page, can't think of a name for it at the mo, so its imaginatively titled, "untitled".

it's my fisrt attempt so any feedback would be welcome

if u want to d/l a 320 kbps version do it below

http://www.divshare.com/download/3982712-ae9

feast · Post by **feast** » Sun Mar 09, 2008 12:49 pm

Nice idea mate. A few things id say tho. Try doin some more edidts with the main bass synth to keep it interestin. Maybe make another riff, n cut it up a bit in places. Also its a bit loud over the rest of the mix. This is just prefferance, but try the tune a few bpm faster, n add a few more hi-hats in to carry it better. Other than that i think its a good tune.

Peace

foodstampz · Post by **foodstampz** » Sun Mar 09, 2008 3:59 pm

I listened its pretty dam good for a first attempt way better than my 3rd attempt. hahaaha. really, im curious how you did the the stuttering effects, is that dblue glitch >?? Sounds good tho, if thats your first then your only going to get better .. like the guy said before i agree with the bass not being that interesting. but i thought the beats are entertaining, they stagger and get chopped up allot.

cool peace.

skinny · Post by **skinny** » Sun Mar 09, 2008 6:33 pm

I like it Alot, Well done on the first go.

warren888k · Post by **warren888k** » Sun Mar 09, 2008 8:44 pm

agreed that the bass was too high in the mix, volume is usually low when i'm making a track and only noticed when i turned it up loud!

i added another hat with a linear pattern kinda low in the mix which comes in after the second drop to drive it a bit more.

i quite like the bass and the notes change after the second drop and the 8 bit hits come in a little after that so i'll leave it.

http://illformed.org/blog/glitch/

that is one of the effects that i used for the edits, there are a few others but this one is the shit!

foodstampz · Post by **foodstampz** » Sun Mar 09, 2008 8:50 pm

hey warren 888 k . funny . im actually downloading from you right now in soulseek. hehee. yeah i figured it was glitch. , you used it creatively that counts. peace man thansk for the tracks .
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warren888k · Post by **warren888k** » Sun Mar 09, 2008 10:34 pm

foodstampz wrote:hey warren 888 k . funny . im actually downloading from you right now in soulseek. hehee. yeah i figured it was glitch. , you used it creatively that counts. peace man thansk for the tracks .
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ha ha, weird

pintjaguar · Post by **pintjaguar** » Mon Mar 10, 2008 12:35 am

me like the sound of the bass! something really zapped out my brain! i'd like to hear maybe an additional breaky snare drum or sumthing like dat and some variety can't harm, but its nice and deep for a first time track, and oh yeah, the vocal thing is somehow not really on the beat and distracts my ears a little...
crazy glitch shit!

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