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2 New tracks - reviews wanted

Post by sulako » Mon Mar 24, 2008 3:38 pm

Hey people, these are my first works in the dubstep sound. I'd appreciate some feedback, good and bad just so i can see what others think. If anybody wants a 320 mp3 of these hit me up and I'll sort it. Cheers, tunes on myspace here-

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Post by djcosmos » Mon Mar 24, 2008 3:59 pm

good work!

1st one: i'm not too keen on the main synthy riff on this 1, it seems too loud, does my head in a little bit... but the bass is phat, i would make it the focus of the track, less emphasis on the synth.. and the reeverb on the drums sounds nice

2nd one: i like this one. maybe a bit more variation, for example change the bassline in the 4th bar

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Post by sulako » Mon Mar 24, 2008 4:02 pm

Kool- cheers for the comments cosmos

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Post by rykastarn » Mon Mar 24, 2008 4:47 pm

Wots he on

Feelin both tunes

Phat

ever feel like throwin me some 320z would be chuffed to play um out

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Post by sulako » Mon Mar 24, 2008 5:58 pm

RykAstarn wrote:Wots he on

Feelin both tunes

Phat

ever feel like throwin me some 320z would be chuffed to play um out

Peace
Hey cheers mate, will hook up some 320's soon.

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Post by gen75 » Mon Mar 24, 2008 8:30 pm

yeah, like em both, im into this synth esp.
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Post by cursedc » Tue Mar 25, 2008 12:24 am

drum hits sound pretty crisp and meaty. The ambient synths could use a bit more warmth in my opinion, but over all I think it could use a tad bit more bass.

Not bad by any mean. I'd bop to it.

B- for overall production.

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Post by sulako » Tue Mar 25, 2008 8:09 am

Thanks for all the comments people, 320's on the way.

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Post by mortalgrey » Tue Mar 25, 2008 9:26 am

great tracks...i agree wit cosmos that the synth line in the first track may be a bit loud/bright/whatever...but myspace has a tendency to do weird things to tracks, so yeah.

on fire is on fire. hotness. keep it up. :)

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Post by fused_forces » Tue Mar 25, 2008 10:26 am

yes man feelin these tracks, on fire is our fav but would defo play both ive u could send us a 320 of each over.

good heavy weight stuff bro.

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Post by d-T-r » Tue Mar 25, 2008 11:01 am

yeah synth is sounding too sharp on the first one. id personally eiher change the wave in the synth or eq the fuck out of it. quite monotonous too. would of liked to hear the notes that stick out of that synth line on their own if that makes sense. -ie not the 'skippy' close together ones that bridge em all up. theres a good melody in there but the synth line is too much.
bass is sounding more than on point though.

on fire is sounding dope.
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Post by deejay » Sun Jul 27, 2008 5:06 am

Excellent mate.....you're on the right track :)

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