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Help needed with tune - what is missing and what to do

Post by rectal » Sun Jun 15, 2008 5:09 pm

hello!
As I said i need helf from you guys - thats my first track without any master - I came to dubstep from death metal - so I am not sure for structure and overall composition of this track - If anybody has a spare time please listen to it and give me a shout whats good and whats wrong

http://www.zshare.net/audio/136600944b0ccb37/

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Post by rectal » Mon Jun 16, 2008 12:10 pm

thanks guys... :(

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Post by cookiemonsta » Mon Jun 16, 2008 12:37 pm

i'l av a listen later bruv....peace

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Post by fuzz_2k » Mon Jun 16, 2008 1:58 pm

easy, love the little twinklin' noise's! tink the bass needs switchin up a bit! different noise same line etc. keep it fresh.

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Post by rectal » Mon Jun 16, 2008 8:52 pm

good idea, will work on it - more help please

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Post by cookiemonsta » Tue Jun 17, 2008 9:08 am

2 be honest mate i reckon u should gather ur own ideas.....im ot tryin 2 be harsh but im jus gettin my point of veiw out...

i reckon that ur music should be created by ur ideas...

wen i first started out i used 2 make shit but i used only my ideas.... after practicing it all flows out...

i reckon u should stop askin for help n crack on ur own tunes, gettin ur textures right etc.... iv been producin for less than a year n its jus comes to me...

If uve got 'it' it will come 2 you.... peace man

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Post by cookiemonsta » Tue Jun 17, 2008 9:09 am

less than half a year i meant... peace :lol:

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Post by primate » Tue Jun 17, 2008 9:21 am

if its a bassline-lead tune, then you need to vary that bassline. try eq-ing it, changing key etc. also layer it with several basses at once, each occupying different frequencies, then you can tweak each layer independently.
you might want to think about a sub bass line as well, and watch out for distortions caused by sounds occupying the same sonic space.

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Post by rectal » Sat Jun 21, 2008 7:04 am

thanks guys - i know that everyone should do own thing - but yoor own style will develop in time as you know how to do things properly and you can focus on being one of a kind
i will work on bass variation i thought is enough vicked - :)

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