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naked-jake
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feedback on my first tune please.

Post by naked-jake » Fri Jun 20, 2008 10:41 pm

easy bass heads.

I've been playing on fruity for a while. listening to dubstep just over 2 years, brought up on garage and hip hop so it's in me haha

anyway, I made this tune, still unsure what to call it. I'd like some helpful feedback cos it's the first dubstep tune I've made that I'm happy with, most I make sound more like grime.

after making it I noticed it sounds a lot like Bengas tune pleasure which is kinda annoying cos I thought I was on to something haha what do you think?

please excuse the ghetto hosting on youtube style...
http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=NY27p7gMbk0

had a bit of fun with the video lol
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Post by eshscramble » Fri Jun 20, 2008 10:58 pm

feelin that for your first tune... dig the r&s visual. try and experiment with fattening up the mix with panning/doubletracking and stuff... there's a lot of space between the monitors, this is where i'm trying to improve anyway. dig the sounds. keep it up
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Post by zillion » Mon Jun 23, 2008 12:04 pm

Enjoyed the tune and the video.

Pretty good tune considering it was your first efforts.

Keep them coming.
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Post by simbi » Mon Jun 23, 2008 7:16 pm

good shit
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Post by greenseed » Mon Jun 23, 2008 10:02 pm

prertttty fuckkk k iiiinnnn sickkk man
loves that squeekish noise u got goin there
solid first somg
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Post by djcosmos » Tue Jun 24, 2008 2:16 am

haha nice video. the tune is pretty good, and about a million times better than my first attempt at dubstep..
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Post by module » Tue Jun 24, 2008 4:55 am

sounds good, keep doing what your doing and you will always make good stuff.
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Post by misk » Tue Jun 24, 2008 6:08 am

djcosmos wrote:about a million times better than my first attempt at dubstep..
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Post by naked-jake » Tue Jul 01, 2008 2:46 am

Nice, cheers for the feedback people!
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Post by lj rekid » Tue Jul 01, 2008 8:04 am

Yeah nice tune, rather hypnotic , in a good way
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