Ital Dub - One Song (eyes down bizniz)

ital_dub · Post by **ital_dub** » Sun Aug 17, 2008 2:25 pm

Lemme know what u think

http://www.zshare.net/audio/17182866e0f128cc/

sio2 · Post by **sio2** » Sun Aug 17, 2008 11:41 pm

Blissful tune. This will be a serious playground for the MC. Is it cool If I play this tune @ the club ? I get paid in bears so I aint makin $ from the playing of it. Lots of rastas in the house will loves this one.

Yes, again.. love this tune. Great ambient break and drop. perfect.

edit: i was joking about the paid in beers thing.

sio2 · Post by **sio2** » Sun Aug 17, 2008 11:45 pm

Upon having a second and third listen I would just have to chime in one more time and say thanks for this one. Don't change a thing.

ital_dub · Post by **ital_dub** » Mon Aug 18, 2008 7:19 am

Sio2 wrote: Is it cool If I play this tune @ the club ? I get paid in bears so I aint makin $ from the playing of it.

This is just a 128kbps. I'd rather get some more feedback on this tune before I pass out 320s. But tnx for the comment!

colossal · Post by **colossal** » Mon Aug 18, 2008 8:58 am

Super nice & mellow, great production..........

ital_dub · Post by **ital_dub** » Mon Aug 18, 2008 12:42 pm

colossal wrote:Super nice & mellow, great production..........

cheers!

ital_dub · Post by **ital_dub** » Tue Aug 19, 2008 7:38 am

Anyone else?

psychonaught · Post by **psychonaught** » Tue Aug 19, 2008 11:35 am

sickness

lush chilled out vibes, nice atmospheres/pads. nicely controlled but fat sub bass, really nice 4am chill out track. would love a 320

promo · Post by **promo** » Tue Aug 19, 2008 11:42 am

Ital_Dub wrote:Anyone else?

I'd comment bro but it seems not a damn soul will comment on my tunes. I'm really getting pretty damn depressed about it.

goldorak · Post by **goldorak** » Tue Aug 19, 2008 2:07 pm

Love this tune !!!

Don't sleep on this!!

king slaff · Post by **king slaff** » Tue Aug 19, 2008 3:26 pm

very chilled n deep- one for late at night i think

thanks for sharing

sio2 · Post by **sio2** » Tue Aug 19, 2008 3:32 pm

yah, when i asked about the club, i meant a 320. OR actually a wave file would be good also. and this is something I would cut if i had a wavefile. My man got some new saphire heads.

critical sound system · Post by **critical sound system** » Tue Aug 19, 2008 4:09 pm

big tune!
320 please!

ital_dub · Post by **ital_dub** » Tue Aug 19, 2008 6:09 pm

Tnx for the comments people. But if anybody has some critique don't hesitate to spill it out

beez · Post by **beez** » Tue Aug 19, 2008 9:48 pm

I really like the pads and the overall mood. It's laid back, deep, and a little dark. It's really nice overall. However, I do have some criticisms for you

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I'm not so much into string or horn sound that comes in around 1:20 or so. It sounds totally out of place with the rest of the arrangement to me. There's got to be some other instrument you could be using for that.

The sound that comes in around 3:12 is fun but I'd rather the drums that disappeared stayed in longer with this sound being more of an accompaniment to the drums.

And the last thing I'd change would be to remove that Walk the Line sample. I'm not a big fan of lifting dialogue from movies as I think it makes almost any track sound corny.

drama(urbannerds) · Post by **drama(urbannerds)** » Tue Aug 19, 2008 11:04 pm

Tunes Sick - 320 Please. Playing Fabric next month would Love to have this for the early hours in Room 3.

Also, agree about the Instrument your using at about 1.20, Maybe try a few others... It doesnt really affect it for me though. Just try something else however just to see.

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murk_dweller · Post by **murk_dweller** » Wed Aug 20, 2008 12:13 am

beez wrote:remove that Walk the Line sample

this is the only thing i would suggest, personally

i would be happy with a 320 regardless

ital_dub · Post by **ital_dub** » Wed Aug 20, 2008 10:20 am

beez wrote:I really like the pads and the overall mood. It's laid back, deep, and a little dark. It's really nice overall. However, I do have some criticisms for you .

I'm not so much into string or horn sound that comes in around 1:20 or so. It sounds totally out of place with the rest of the arrangement to me. There's got to be some other instrument you could be using for that.

The sound that comes in around 3:12 is fun but I'd rather the drums that disappeared stayed in longer with this sound being more of an accompaniment to the drums.

And the last thing I'd change would be to remove that Walk the Line sample. I'm not a big fan of lifting dialogue from movies as I think it makes almost any track sound corny.

Nice one! tnx people

ngyoshi · Post by **ngyoshi** » Wed Aug 20, 2008 11:45 am

Loving the flow of this track its very deep bro!

Same hear about the sample I would prefer it without,

I can hear what you’re going for with the beeping sound at 320, just doesn’t quite sit right, maybe a slightly less electronic sound?

Wkd work overall though id love a 320 aswell!
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Ital Dub - One Song (eyes down bizniz)

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