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finch
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new tune

Post by finch » Mon Jul 10, 2006 1:02 pm

this is my first attempt at a dubstep tune, i've been writin techno and hardcore for a couple of years but i'm fuckin lovin this dubstep, especially since i downloaded that excision dubstep summer mix, totally my type of tunes!

anyways, http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?a ... C21CA7447A

i'm not really used used to this half time / 2step thing! so any comments on my percussion arrangement are handy. and on anythin else.

ta, finch

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Post by collision » Mon Jul 10, 2006 4:09 pm

i like it, but you're missing a mid melody i think.
this would be a good intro and ending for a song, but i'm waiting for something else in your song that never came.
your percussion is good, so is the bass, however, more melodics are necessary in my opinion...
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finch
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Post by finch » Mon Jul 10, 2006 6:50 pm

cheers mate, i know what you mean. will work on that tomorrow. peace
anyone else?

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Post by zacharia360bpm » Mon Jul 10, 2006 10:42 pm

I like the lead a lot but I think its a bit over played.
With a bit of work this could be a killer.
Keep it up.
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