Alien Dub Clip

[thump rat]

Heres a tune i am working on, would just like to hear some feedback on it as i have got a bit stuck with it. Cheers

http://davetaylor13.googlepages.com/AlienDubclip.mp3

[fullyrecordingz]

kool track. what did u use for those effcts at the beginin or is it sampled?
the bassline aint catchy at all. its a bit random.. its very random. i reckon u should simple it down a bit.
a synth or instrumental would go well over the beat also.

[thump rat]

The ambience is sampled from an aliens sample pack, then i made the one of the synths with absynth and molested one with a sample and alot of kontakt processing.

Im not 100% with the bassline, i've worked on the bass synth further, but as far as the riff goes i was just experimenting as originally this was meant to have an emcee on, so i just chucked some basslines in there to see what he prefered.

Cheers for the feedback btw.

[fullyrecordingz]

kool. yeh i can tell it was 4 an Mc.
I think the bassline gets so random it detracts ur ears from the beat.
the first 8 bars of bass were good enuff.
An Alien soundin synth would go well with this beat.
seriously aswell doe. try phattenin up ur beats a bit still.
like u want a bang
u can layer dem. compress stuff.. add fast delay echos etc

safe