Noisy first attempt

[principalcomponent]

This is my first attempt at a straight 140/70 bpm dub step track. I've mostly done hip hop beats in the past. It ended up pretty noisy with lots of bit rate reduction effects.

Any and all feedback / criticism greatly appreciated.

http://soundcloud.com/principalcomponent/carbon-1

Soundcloud should let you download a 320 if you want one--click the "mp3" button in the upper right corner

[fullyrecordingz]

I like 'September', not really feelin the others