first finished track, constructive criticism!

mrlaa · Post by **mrlaa** » Sun Feb 15, 2009 7:30 pm

hey up, this is my first track that im happy with so far, ive been producing for a few months now on and off (/messing around in logic)

i know it sounds alot like burial but that was the idea..

its a remix of a dnb tune my mate did.

http://www.sendspace.com/file/jbr2p7

nice one for listening, any pointers, constructive criticism would be more than appreciated.

jroe8 · Post by **jroe8** » Sun Feb 15, 2009 7:49 pm

sick as fuck dave

mrlaa · Post by **mrlaa** » Sun Feb 15, 2009 10:31 pm

nice one to sendspace for uploading HALF the track..

mrlaa · Post by **mrlaa** » Tue Feb 17, 2009 6:45 pm

come one, 49 views and 1 comment, i invite people to criticise me!

zgomot · Post by **zgomot** » Tue Feb 17, 2009 6:51 pm

The piano line in the beginning is very melodic and the processed vocal blends in well. reminds me of older rave. But that's cool.

Oooh, nice drumwork, pretty clever stuff.

I'd like the bass to be more present, though. There isn't much of it besides that rumble.

Pretty good stuff.

first finished track, constructive criticism!

first finished track, constructive criticism!

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