The Beautiful People - Marylin Manson (Burguez rmx free 320)

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The Beautiful People - Marylin Manson (Burguez rmx free 320)

Post by - burguez - » Fri Mar 06, 2009 5:34 am

hi people check my new tune "The Beautiful People" - Marylin Manson (Burguez rmx free 320)

Link for Download :

http://www.sendspace.com/file/m17ece

Feedback Please :wink:
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Post by k.s.t.r » Fri Mar 06, 2009 5:56 am

fan of the slaughter step sir. only suggestion would be to insert some variations, maybe more melody... sample a break/vocals/2bar riff in the song drop that in... and have bring in a massive bass drop. ez bruv. - Hunch
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Post by - burguez - » Fri Mar 06, 2009 6:12 pm

thanks 4 the comment bro
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Post by screwhead » Fri Mar 06, 2009 7:56 pm

It's alright, but it really feels like there's something missing.. can't quite put my finger on what exactly.. Not just bass or changes/melodies, but I dunno, more vocals or more identifyable guitar riffs.. The bass also sounds like it's not in the right key/notes..

It's good, but could use a bit more work IMO.
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