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Parental Advisory - new tune

Post by albinodub » Sat Mar 07, 2009 12:33 pm

My newest DUB,
much better than the last, i think,
a bit darker and flows a bit more,
listen and download here
http://www.divshare.com/download/6782032-677
Last edited by albinodub on Wed Mar 11, 2009 11:55 pm, edited 1 time in total.
sines wrote:Im having leftbrovers for supper tonight.
the dub lemon wrote:
johney wrote:I don´t know... i just think the original is too awesome to mess with...
but you definitely did well :)
I was waiting for someone to say that but it's called Lemon so I had no choice except to remix it...it's the citrus way.
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Post by albinodub » Sat Mar 07, 2009 12:38 pm

Oh and feel free to comment
sines wrote:Im having leftbrovers for supper tonight.
the dub lemon wrote:
johney wrote:I don´t know... i just think the original is too awesome to mess with...
but you definitely did well :)
I was waiting for someone to say that but it's called Lemon so I had no choice except to remix it...it's the citrus way.
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Post by albinodub » Sat Mar 07, 2009 12:52 pm

bump :o
sines wrote:Im having leftbrovers for supper tonight.
the dub lemon wrote:
johney wrote:I don´t know... i just think the original is too awesome to mess with...
but you definitely did well :)
I was waiting for someone to say that but it's called Lemon so I had no choice except to remix it...it's the citrus way.
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Post by albinodub » Sat Mar 07, 2009 1:10 pm

Buuuuuuuuuuump
sines wrote:Im having leftbrovers for supper tonight.
the dub lemon wrote:
johney wrote:I don´t know... i just think the original is too awesome to mess with...
but you definitely did well :)
I was waiting for someone to say that but it's called Lemon so I had no choice except to remix it...it's the citrus way.
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Post by albinodub » Sat Mar 07, 2009 10:30 pm

bump till i get a comment,
sines wrote:Im having leftbrovers for supper tonight.
the dub lemon wrote:
johney wrote:I don´t know... i just think the original is too awesome to mess with...
but you definitely did well :)
I was waiting for someone to say that but it's called Lemon so I had no choice except to remix it...it's the citrus way.
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Post by albinodub » Sun Mar 08, 2009 9:13 pm

BUMP
sines wrote:Im having leftbrovers for supper tonight.
the dub lemon wrote:
johney wrote:I don´t know... i just think the original is too awesome to mess with...
but you definitely did well :)
I was waiting for someone to say that but it's called Lemon so I had no choice except to remix it...it's the citrus way.
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Post by sticky feet » Sun Mar 08, 2009 9:20 pm

The kick has this wierd delay and sounds abit bad, sounds too hardstyle to me. The bassline is cool but never changes and it bothers me a bit.
The flow is cool but you really have to work on your drum patterns.
If you need any extra help just PM me and well talk
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Post by albinodub » Sun Mar 08, 2009 9:27 pm

thanks for the comment,
it's nice for someone to help out a new producer,
ye, i was thinking of someway to vary the bass.
will pm you at some point,
thanks for the info
sines wrote:Im having leftbrovers for supper tonight.
the dub lemon wrote:
johney wrote:I don´t know... i just think the original is too awesome to mess with...
but you definitely did well :)
I was waiting for someone to say that but it's called Lemon so I had no choice except to remix it...it's the citrus way.
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Post by albinodub » Wed Mar 11, 2009 11:55 pm

new link for updated tune,
comments, critism, any sign of life would be appreciated
http://www.divshare.com/download/6782032-677
sines wrote:Im having leftbrovers for supper tonight.
the dub lemon wrote:
johney wrote:I don´t know... i just think the original is too awesome to mess with...
but you definitely did well :)
I was waiting for someone to say that but it's called Lemon so I had no choice except to remix it...it's the citrus way.
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Post by albinodub » Thu Mar 12, 2009 10:50 am

:(
sines wrote:Im having leftbrovers for supper tonight.
the dub lemon wrote:
johney wrote:I don´t know... i just think the original is too awesome to mess with...
but you definitely did well :)
I was waiting for someone to say that but it's called Lemon so I had no choice except to remix it...it's the citrus way.
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Post by albinodub » Sat Mar 14, 2009 8:07 am

Bump to the max :o
sines wrote:Im having leftbrovers for supper tonight.
the dub lemon wrote:
johney wrote:I don´t know... i just think the original is too awesome to mess with...
but you definitely did well :)
I was waiting for someone to say that but it's called Lemon so I had no choice except to remix it...it's the citrus way.
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