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A tune I just made !

Post by intoccabile » Thu Dec 22, 2005 6:09 am

I just finished this little tune, it has yet to be mastered

Comments please, help a dubstep noob out ! 320kbps, full tune, brap !

http://s40.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2TKW ... U2FRWIKN9F

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Post by secretagentgel » Thu Dec 22, 2005 2:08 pm

loving the warp bass! damn nice. needs some sub tho. nice vibe all the way around.

corey

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Post by andythetwig » Thu Dec 22, 2005 2:54 pm

man that's my kind of tune... lovely interesting bass lead.

kinda stop-starty though... feels like it wants to build more... could put more breaks loops in?

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Post by stone » Thu Dec 22, 2005 4:36 pm

Im really into this. It reminds me of Vex'd a little bit but is more melodic. I like how stop-starty is. Make it as herky-jerky as possible! I also like the ambient sounds.

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Post by intoccabile » Thu Dec 22, 2005 6:14 pm

Yay =D

Thanks for the great feedback, really appreciated !
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Post by missused » Thu Dec 22, 2005 6:43 pm

warping bass wikid. def a sub need, but the stop-start of it is carried by the bass. nice 1

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Post by mrjiggyfly » Thu Dec 22, 2005 8:35 pm

Bipolar,Schizophrenic Shit bro,

I'm definitely feeling it. As for the jerky feel, the man is working on his own stylee.

Large up, Whoever you may be

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Post by dubweiser » Thu Dec 22, 2005 8:36 pm

Wicked stuff!! But in my opinion it need's more bass.
Work it a bit more, it has potential to be a MONSTER tune. :wink:
Keep up the good work!

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Post by mr. messer » Thu Dec 22, 2005 8:55 pm

id alternate the bass as it gets tedious toward the end.

fuckin loving those ambient pipe noises. maybe u could make more use of em. maybe add them as a kind of subtle background harmony to the bass if u wanna leave the bass alone. some shuffly hi-hats would sound nice to keep it goin. and if u want this stop-start feel id make it more blatant by givin those random breaks some sick bridges and some more meatiness.

but its a sick tune. work on it mannnnnnnn.

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Post by moldy » Thu Dec 22, 2005 11:10 pm

Feeling it!

I'd love to hear a sub bass line for some call and response... could be a little longer?

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Post by taxidriver » Wed Dec 28, 2005 4:01 am

moldy wrote:Feeling it!

I'd love to hear a sub bass line for some call and response... could be a little longer?
Yes, a sub bass line with the same melody to combine with the other would be nice as it gets a bit repetitive, but that´s a great track anyway.

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Post by stone » Wed Dec 28, 2005 6:45 pm

this sounds like a shapeshifting ninja

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Post by mestizo » Thu Dec 29, 2005 6:08 pm

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:o can you re up the track ?

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