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aggle ale · Post by **aggle ale** » Wed May 27, 2009 12:48 am

its just a snippet of an unfinished tune but let me know what you think

http://www.myspace.com/aggledsounds

koch556 · Post by **koch556** » Wed May 27, 2009 12:57 pm

Hello mate - nice original vibe to this track. Here's some feedback (take it or leave it

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I think the hi hats need lifting a bit - they sound like they have had a bit too much of the top end taken off. The sub sounds good, and deep without distorting. Snare could do with being a bit punchier? Maybe more melody sounds, perhaps skanking piano or maybe some blippy arepggiated synth lead sound?

Hope this helps bro, thanks for sharing!

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aggle ale · Post by **aggle ale** » Wed May 27, 2009 2:31 pm

safe for the feedback, much appreciated

everything you've said is pretty much what i've had in the pipeline for it

saw you try to add me as a friend but ignored it by accident could you try again please

koch556 · Post by **koch556** » Wed May 27, 2009 4:29 pm

Re-added as friend - No worries on the feedback - I am not sure there is enough constructive feedback on this part of the forum sometimes, especially for guys looking for ideas of half finished tunes.

Take it easy bro

aggle ale · Post by **aggle ale** » Wed May 27, 2009 7:21 pm

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