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CAPTAIN HOOK!

Post by HangManDubstep » Mon Jul 13, 2009 2:23 pm

hey guys, little collab with captain hook
Track:Neverland

enjoy PLEASE GIVE FEEDBACK
Not mastered yet or finished
http://www.myspace.com/captainhookdubstep


EDIT!!!
THIS IS CAPTAIN HOOKS TRACK..
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Post by HangManDubstep » Mon Jul 13, 2009 9:07 pm

shameful bumpage
http://www.myspace.com/hangmandubstep
http://twitter.com/HangManDubstep

AIM= shortcircuitstep

CONTACT FOR BOOKING/REMIX/PRODUCTION ENQUIRIES: EMAIL - x-fyah-music@hotmail.com

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Post by HangManDubstep » Tue Jul 14, 2009 7:50 pm

FEEDBACK..............EVEN IF U HATE IT
http://www.myspace.com/hangmandubstep
http://twitter.com/HangManDubstep

AIM= shortcircuitstep

CONTACT FOR BOOKING/REMIX/PRODUCTION ENQUIRIES: EMAIL - x-fyah-music@hotmail.com

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Post by bugsky » Tue Jul 14, 2009 7:55 pm

i've already said this via myspace, I totally digg this track Neverland. I love the dark, glitchy, distorted synths.
Hook me up for a collab or something. (http://www.myspace.com/bugsky)

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Post by axon » Tue Jul 14, 2009 7:59 pm

Yo,

You've got the right Idea but really it's a bit of a mess. There's no real groove to it and the balance is not great. This is intended as constructive criticism, so please don't take it the wrong way. It'll make you better in the long run. :)

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Post by the lemon pharma » Tue Jul 14, 2009 7:59 pm

k feedback... yes very much unfinished, needs a prpoer mix down. that synth sample u bring in at the 1.30 mark-ish sounds very 'nintendo' '8-bit' like, i cant decide whether i like it or not, as for the bassline, it doesnt really do it for me, i'm imagining it speeded up and put on a dnb track, i think it would work better in that scenario. Maybe thats all the tune needs (other than mastering) is a wobble or 3 ;)
hope this helps, just my opinion.
peace

EDIT: its nothing like skream ;) lol

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Post by rub-a-dub-dub » Tue Jul 14, 2009 8:51 pm

Yeh this is nothing like Skream. Just sounds kinda 'boring', as somebody said before, sounds nintendo-y when it does finally come in, and even then it doesnt do much for me. Still some ppl might like it, but its not for me. sorry mate

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Post by HangManDubstep » Tue Jul 14, 2009 8:55 pm

k guys i see u hate it..i hope this doesnt ruin my image......
k i have taken it off
http://www.myspace.com/hangmandubstep
http://twitter.com/HangManDubstep

AIM= shortcircuitstep

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Post by rub-a-dub-dub » Wed Jul 15, 2009 5:35 am

I dont hate it mate, shit at least your making your own tunes, i respect that. You asked for honest feedback so i gave it, dont let that knock you from creating music.

If you like it, at the end of the day thats all that matters, you made a tune yourself that you like. Big ups.

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Post by the lemon pharma » Mon Jul 20, 2009 6:08 pm

Rub-A-Dub-Dub wrote:I dont hate it mate, shit at least your making your own tunes, i respect that. You asked for honest feedback so i gave it, dont let that knock you from creating music.

If you like it, at the end of the day thats all that matters, you made a tune yourself that you like. Big ups.
AGREED

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Post by _boring » Tue Jul 21, 2009 12:56 am

its ok, i cant really tell from myspace,

the sounds are not the problem, the mixdown just sounds really cluttered, at least from myspace!

i really dig the vibe and the synths.

320 me so i can check it out proper???
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Post by otis » Tue Jul 21, 2009 6:16 am

Rub-A-Dub-Dub wrote:I dont hate it mate, shit at least your making your own tunes, i respect that. You asked for honest feedback so i gave it, dont let that knock you from creating music.

If you like it, at the end of the day thats all that matters, you made a tune yourself that you like. Big ups.
THIS.

Ive heard your other tune and that is sick!
My new tunes and shizz - Otis Beatz!

Otisbeatz - Fade (free download soon)

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Post by HangManDubstep » Tue Jul 21, 2009 1:25 pm

@otis
o did u just hear it on my page or at an event?
http://www.myspace.com/hangmandubstep
http://twitter.com/HangManDubstep

AIM= shortcircuitstep

CONTACT FOR BOOKING/REMIX/PRODUCTION ENQUIRIES: EMAIL - x-fyah-music@hotmail.com

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