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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Posted: Sat Aug 07, 2010 3:47 pm
by CollisionCourse

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Posted: Sat Aug 07, 2010 4:01 pm
by RY_FEAR
@ HAAck - Heather - really good production...like this track and the others on soundcloud

@ Amphibian - Something else - Love ur dark vibe....but not feeling the flute riff that comes in around 2:20 but other than that love the track

@ Kiev - Imaginary dub - great track bro...sounds like something Anti-Social would play on the podcast

Here is my track and my influences are anything DJ's Youngsta ,Tunnidge,Cyrus and Distance would play...

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Posted: Sat Aug 07, 2010 4:03 pm
by billy crystal meth
CollisionCourse wrote:Soundcloud

nice, how did you get that kick so nice and snappy>?

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Posted: Sat Aug 07, 2010 5:29 pm
by transfer
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oldish tune but yeah leave feedback on the cloud

safe

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Posted: Sat Aug 07, 2010 8:27 pm
by icebagg
CollisionCourse wrote:@ homage
sub urban - im feelin the intro, and the little instrument stab you throw in here an there. the drop is fucking evil, some dark shit going down here, the drums are sounding fucking tight aswell. again the eeriness (sp) on the breakdown sets up the second drop noycely. one of the hi hats in coming in a little too much, but overall big tune. you got anything signed yet?

@ kiev
speak no more - iwas gonna say the shakers are coming through too much but i see you cant do much. suppose that makes all advice pretty worthless so ill tell what i like about it. love that background humming and that percussion goes well with the rest. also i like the little vocal stabs like that one that comes in at 0.55 & 1.09. overall its decent, good job.

Much thanks man! Nothing (officially) signed at the moment, however I am on SAVIORSELF records (www.saviorselfla.com). Hope to release this and some others by winter.

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Posted: Sun Aug 08, 2010 3:42 am
by pain
Conflux wrote:@pain - Intro is a bit wack to me. Have you tried reversing some of those pad samples. Like the progression throughout and nice work on the drums nice groove and not too busy.
Thanks for the feedback. My intros are usually the toughest part for me to create for whatever reason. The sounds in the intro are both the pads n later melody both reversed with some effect on it. I'll keep working at it.

On your track: Sounds tight but that intro is way too long for me. I would have started it around :54 where the kick starts to play. Interesting add with I believe the amen break being used in the middle parts. Like the bass for the 2nd section. After the gun cock that happens at 4:50 maybe something can be added or changed to signify the ending. Good stuff.

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Posted: Sun Aug 08, 2010 5:40 am
by Basic A
So, this is a revisit of something ive had in my projects folder for ages now... its from about 6 months ago, when I was trying to learn arabic/indian/judean scales... Its definately not my best material and im not really looking for much criticism because like i said, its a very old project and my styles changed alot since this. But. I finally opened it up the other day looking for melody inspiration, and couldnt help but get some drums and sub behind it... long story short, free tune, sounds like my old more melodic less subwoofer kinda stuff, if any of you have known me for a while.

Cop the download if you like it, leave me some feedback and Ill return the favor as usual. Mostly just trying to spam a half assed revisit though.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Posted: Sun Aug 08, 2010 9:35 am
by den5hion
@Basic A

I really liked the percs :D gives the track a nice touch. The instruments you used for the melody sound really good

@Transfer

Nice Bass 8) you could have added somethin more to make the song a bit more interesting.. Not just the drums and the bass

@Collision Course

The voice is nice n trippy. Smooth song 8)

@Ry Fear

Eerie track.. i like the dark feel it has.. The drums could use some work and it would be better if they changed throughout the song

@Galbm

Arent you the guy that copys and pastes other producers basslines?

@Daddy mchectic

Really good song... The MC flows well with the track.. Liked it a lot but i guess you could change it up a bit as the song progresses


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Here's a remix i made for a remix competition

Feedback Appreciated!

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Posted: Sun Aug 08, 2010 11:18 am
by Ptrn
@RY_FEAR on fear - can definitely hear your influences, nice and dark, eyes down stuff. really cool
@CollisionCourse - vocals on maybe are right up my street, feelin it
@Matthew-B on warsaw 44 - nice and mellow with a bit of distance sounding filth popping through, pretty sweet

heres a couple of my tunes, see what you think, im still total noob status so production is very amateur, only been doing it a couple of months so be gentle :) :) just playing about trying to find sounds i like. there's a few more up there if u want to check them out
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Posted: Sun Aug 08, 2010 4:04 pm
by Runna and Cricky
The start is excellent , the drop is also good , but the middle part and maybe even from the ending . What are we missing ? -t-
If anyone who is experienced and wants to have a longer chat about it , add me on MSN ( hydraulic_head@hotmail.com ).All kinds of advice is appreciated ;)
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Posted: Sun Aug 08, 2010 6:53 pm
by Runna and Cricky
aaand we just finished this too (:
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Posted: Mon Aug 09, 2010 1:47 am
by WeBang
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New tune finished.

ALSO I DON'T usually post my feed back in the threads but post em on soundcloud jsut an FYI!!!!

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Posted: Mon Aug 09, 2010 3:39 am
by Siderealdb
@den5hion- sick tune man. Fat bass, fatty kick, nice glitch work, and nice melody.


@Ptrn- The female vocal sample is used to much in this, and the dude has way to much reverb. Maybe back off the compressor/limiter, drop that noise floor, and remove the first six seconds of the song. Or just find that bad channel and delete it, Unless you wanted that crackle thoughout the entire tune, then go for it.


@Ry_Fear- Yeah, bring some of the percussion out a little more, and try to eq out the sibilance in your sample at 2:09, or wherever that guy talks.


So I put this one in last month, and reworked the shit out of it. Feedback would be appreciated.
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Posted: Mon Aug 09, 2010 5:42 am
by aux
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A remix I did for a vocalist/producer in Hong Kong - MC Rebearth.
Would be keen to hear what you guys think. :roll:

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Posted: Mon Aug 09, 2010 5:19 pm
by reignstep
- Siderealdb : Awesome man, nice progression throughout your track, it doesn't really drop, which fit perfectly in the type tune you made. Kind of an 'epic progression' towards the vocal breakdown. Serious production , I loved it :)

-We Bang: I liked the intro, but IMO you should highpass the bass on your buildup, now you're kinda spoiling the drop (IMO). Drop itself and the bass that followed were tight, arp gave a nice touch too. Overall very clean tune

-Ptrn: for being an 'amateur' producer, this sounds really good. I just wonder why there's no sort of drums in it? Soft jazz like drums would make this very good. Also your lead after 3.10 needs more work. You can do tons with it , so use your imagination and make something nice of it :) Vocals were a real nice touch just a shame there's no drums..

-Den5hion: very grimey, VERY good. I absolutely loved the 2nd drop. Nice drum work, I find it not too many producers pay alot of attention to their drums, I think you did. Not much to criticize except that your main bass could be abit more sharp, but that's just tastes.


New track I finished up today:
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Posted: Mon Aug 09, 2010 6:48 pm
by Joma

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Posted: Mon Aug 09, 2010 10:18 pm
by RightOnTime27
reignz- that track is huge, and honestly my favorite part was the drums, they sounded nice and tight and made the song head bobbing.
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Posted: Tue Aug 10, 2010 12:53 am
by nftfhx
@We Bang - I like your drums, the snare sounds really nice and the tune is pretty sweeet, same with your synths they're sounding cool
I think you should layer your synth, widen it or maybe add something so it doesn't sound so thin. Maybe try an eq to bring out more low end
also, maybe a sample or too will keep things interesting:)

@Siderealdb-i like the sound of things man, it's very original and your synths are sounding great
maybe mix it down a little bit more and maybe some eq's to make sure everything is standing out how it should be, and it'd be sorted
not much more i'd add to it man:)

@reignz - really nice bass drum man, really punchy and the actual tune is pretty dirty too, i'm liking it
i don't think it really needs anything tbf, maybe some more high end just to fill it out, but it's not really necessary it's really good:)


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let me know what you guys are thinking:)

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Posted: Tue Aug 10, 2010 12:56 am
by urbannerd62
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moar purple shizz if thats what you wanna call it.. any feedback appreciated. returning all favors :]

edit: for some reason the quality of it on soundcloud is a bit shitty.. :?

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Posted: Tue Aug 10, 2010 5:28 am
by dubplateguy
Hey Guys, I posted this song a little while ago, but didnt receive very much feedback, so I guess Im posting it again.
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