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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JANUARY 2011

Posted: Mon Jan 10, 2011 1:56 am
by Juttah123
This is my first ever post on the forum! and these ar my first two finished tracks :6:

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Ive only got the wip uploaded atm as im away from home but i'll sort it out when im back...


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Cheers! -r-

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JANUARY 2011

Posted: Mon Jan 10, 2011 1:58 am
by Juttah123
Krucial wrote:DEBASER love the drop

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Nice intro man very nice

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JANUARY 2011

Posted: Mon Jan 10, 2011 4:45 am
by comfyman
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6dFGEvMIrHg


debaser1 really liking your bass synth. also what program you using?

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JANUARY 2011

Posted: Mon Jan 10, 2011 8:17 am
by mark_grundell

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JANUARY 2011

Posted: Mon Jan 10, 2011 8:38 am
by den5hion
@Sprayypaint

808 cowbell ftw :P really nice atmosphere... yeah it sounds a little empty... someone rhyming over it would really complete this track...

@Debaser1

Killer Bass sounds... the rhythm of the 2nd drop was really good... its pretty varied throughout the song which is good.. keeps me interested...

@a5hl3y2k6

Nice atmoshphere.. bass is awesome... the only thing i guess was that the snare was a bit too loud for my ears


Here's something I made because i was really bored and wanted to hear something really loud and distorted....
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Saturating everything got the desired effect.... :vader:

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JANUARY 2011

Posted: Mon Jan 10, 2011 11:08 am
by Debaser1
comfyman wrote:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6dFGEvMIrHg


debaser1 really liking your bass synth. also what program you using?

I'm doing everything in Reason. Sequencing and sound sourcing. Mostly use malstroms and a few thors for bass sounds. :D:


Your track has a really great rhythm to it. Really steppin. Vox samples are great too. As for the mix: I think there's too many low mids in general. The bass doesn't give the kick enough room to breathe. Also, the congo's or whatever don't blend in enough. Simple EQing or a tad of reverb and level change should do the trick. Nice track though.

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JANUARY 2011

Posted: Mon Jan 10, 2011 11:53 am
by jaydot


I thought I'd do a re-remix of my track "Light a Rainbow" with a sorta downtempo chilled garage vibe instead of dubstep. Let me know your thoughts and feedback gladly returned of course.

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JANUARY 2011

Posted: Mon Jan 10, 2011 1:30 pm
by nnny
@Juttah123 This is the thread for finished tracks, post them in the WIP mate! lol :D

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JANUARY 2011

Posted: Mon Jan 10, 2011 8:06 pm
by Semihedonist
@a5hl3y2k6 - Anubis - Dolphine - nice flow.. smooth hihats... don't like wobbles much but your track have soul :) maybe little more progress.. something new in bass or new sound from aprox 3.21.. good job

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JANUARY 2011

Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2011 1:16 am
by Daisy-Chain

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JANUARY 2011

Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2011 1:22 am
by Debaser1
This forum is becoming increasingly filled with people who just drop tracks in expecting an essay about them.
FEEDBACK AND THEN YOU'LL GET SOME

I always provide detailed feedback, and since I posted this track, I've had 2 very limited sentences on it, and there's been 6 or 7 tracks just dropped in expecting feedback.
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This is a community! Come on, jeeze :w:

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JANUARY 2011

Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2011 1:58 am
by Dub_tro_nic_
nnny wrote:@Iko Rush Posted in the other thread my views on this, its nice :D
@Debaser1 Like the chord progression, seems pretty eerie to me, me like :) Like the drums, drop on this is HUGE. Very nice :)
@Noonyez Already commented on yours too I believe on the other thread.

I know I posted this in dec's finished, but technically its January, so I'm posting it here.
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Yo I liked the way you came in to that drop that was real deep. Thats a real deep bassline. I liked it and also liked the rythym and how it was real melodic rather than filth i liked it good job.

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JANUARY 2011

Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2011 1:59 am
by Dub_tro_nic_
By the way I was loooking to see if maybe somebody knew more on how to mix dubstep? Cause Im looking for a teacher. Thanks PEACE [=

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JANUARY 2011

Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2011 4:51 am
by Siberun
Debaser1 wrote:This forum is becoming increasingly filled with people who just drop tracks in expecting an essay about them.
FEEDBACK AND THEN YOU'LL GET SOME

I always provide detailed feedback, and since I posted this track, I've had 2 very limited sentences on it, and there's been 6 or 7 tracks just dropped in expecting feedback.
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This is a community! Come on, jeeze :w:
I'm with you mate, I released my track 2 days ago and it's already 2 pages back with one line of feedback. I did my part in providing 3 pieces of response, now please do the same.

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If we don't stick up for each other as dubstep producers assisting dubstep producers, who will? :/


Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JANUARY 2011

Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2011 10:55 am
by briskisgoodforu
@ Conformer - Duck Shredder
Like the fact the the drum beat is atypical as far as filthier stuff goes. Snare and midrange feels wide and crunchy, which is good to me. I think the breakdown is interesting, although I think the repeating vocal sample gets a little annoying. I feel like the general melody gets somewhat repetitive even if your morphing the sounds throughout.

@ Submission. Thick and warm. Good stuff in that regard. I really like when the heavy midrange backs out and the synth comes in. I feel like overall the midrange fills up a lot of space and is somewhat overbearing and would be more effective if it dropped out for moments to create more emphasis. Drum work is rather simple. I think it would move much better if you incorporated more kick drum patterns, definitely more danceable.

@ Dream in Oriental

I like the piano chord progression. And when the sub drops it feels lovely haha. I dig the atmosphere, I like how it seems like multiple elements to create one atmosphere. It's got that epic feel. I think its awesome how you use those background synths or whatever they are with the increasing pace of vibrato. Creates much more human and emotional element. I feel like the piano sample is too resonant or something. Like it takes up to much space. I really liked this piece though.

http://soundcloud.com/briskisgoodforu/reach

let me know what you think
thanks

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JANUARY 2011

Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2011 4:00 pm
by ninthy4
@nnny - love the piano riff, bass and that screamy lead goes very well. Very nice drum pattern
@Siberun - sick filthy sounds man, very good variation. That melody is very mystic and creepy, I like it. All fit in well togheter
@briskisgoodforu - I don't really know man, can't judge as I'm not into this kind of stuff really. The track is well produced, I love that squarey synth and melody is catchy :)

my new tune, dnb this time for a change. :)
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JANUARY 2011

Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2011 6:19 pm
by Semihedonist
Biggls wrote: I'm using Live 8 too which rocks my jocks. Love that shit.
Love Live8 too!! everything is pleasure :)

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JANUARY 2011

Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2011 6:33 pm
by Semihedonist
@filthy_ - Abandonallships - I like your beat and sound on beginning... with smooth shaker! ...i dont like this synth rave part but dark sounds are nice... maybe you should try to add some smooth pads to tracks like this. cheers!

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JANUARY 2011

Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2011 9:09 pm
by kidstrange
@nylle smoooth dignn the intro. enjoy that falling sound going on there...beautiful piano. once again good ass job man !

@a5hl3y2k6 really feeling the atmosphere. nice reverb on the snyth damn good tune.

@sprayyypaint very smooth reminds me of "Of Montreal" no complaints and perhaps see what rhymes someone can come up with may sound good

@jaydot -"Light a Rainbow"- i like the vox it is very laid back. nice sounds going on all n all great work

@briskisgoodforu I like this very smooth chill .. love the bass line.. no complaints what so ever.

Heres what i got im almost positive its done. a few minor tweaks but all in all its finished.
((my sig is what it was before))
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JANUARY 2011

Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2011 11:28 pm
by johnny6
Den5hion: Nice, anything distorted sounds good! I like it. The effects in the intro are good. Personally the panning from left to right was a bit to much and it was making me feel dizzy.

Debaser1: I'm into it, got a real good groove to it. Good variations too.

nnny: Man that intro is solid! Good use of sounds all round. Good work!

Here's something I cooked up. Let me know what you think, and enjoy!

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