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Posted: Sun Aug 02, 2009 9:15 pm
by d16
rectaldubz wrote:just finished up a track called captivation, i used burial's drum beat from archangel just to tell you now, ANY FEEDBACK would make my day/night thanks:
http://soundcloud.com/rectaldubz
ask for a 320 if you want one
I get a "Oops, looks like we can't find that page!"

This is my 1st ever Dubstep track.
http://soundcloud.com/d16/d16-0167
D16 - 0167
Comments?

Posted: Sun Aug 02, 2009 11:11 pm
by dansu
but you made other kinds of music before?
cuz dis tune is wicked

instand-dl

Posted: Mon Aug 03, 2009 12:06 am
by d16
Dansu wrote:but you made other kinds of music before?
cuz dis tune is wicked

instand-dl
Hehe, thanks mate.
Yeah, I've made hiphop and hardstyle before.
So I've got the basic already.

Posted: Mon Aug 03, 2009 12:47 am
by tripwire22
Ill offer Feedback to anyone who comments on my news songs Heaven and Dub Jungle

Posted: Mon Aug 03, 2009 1:02 am
by d16
Tripwire22 wrote:Ill offer Feedback to anyone who comments on my news songs Heaven and Dub Jungle
Heaven sounds wicked.
Dub jungle is cool, too.
But the beginning bass sounds a bit.. distorted? dunno.
And you could've probably chosen other toms (Don't really know what they are.)
Now do my track ;D

Posted: Mon Aug 03, 2009 4:00 am
by tripwire22
D16 wrote:
Tripwire22 wrote:Ill offer Feedback to anyone who comments on my news songs Heaven and Dub Jungle
Heaven sounds wicked.
Dub jungle is cool, too.
But the beginning bass sounds a bit.. distorted? dunno.
And you could've probably chosen other toms (Don't really know what they are.)
Now do my track ;D
yeah idk what happen to the bass in the beginning and i couldnt fix that but w.e.

your song is actually very professional everything is really together though what are the vocals saying i cant understand them. the bring that beat back drop is intense

Posted: Mon Aug 03, 2009 5:54 am
by d16
Tripwire22 wrote:
D16 wrote:
Tripwire22 wrote:Ill offer Feedback to anyone who comments on my news songs Heaven and Dub Jungle
Heaven sounds wicked.
Dub jungle is cool, too.
But the beginning bass sounds a bit.. distorted? dunno.
And you could've probably chosen other toms (Don't really know what they are.)
Now do my track ;D
yeah idk what happen to the bass in the beginning and i couldnt fix that but w.e.

your song is actually very professional everything is really together though what are the vocals saying i cant understand them. the bring that beat back drop is intense
Hehe, that's the whole point.
Everytime I listen to it I can hear something diffrent.
It's an vocal sample from Vengeance Cutvox 2.
Thanks for the comment.
Although it feels like the wobble is a bit too obvious.
It really sticks out.
Should've put it a little bit lower in the mix.

Posted: Mon Aug 03, 2009 11:26 am
by dansu
D16 wrote:
Tripwire22 wrote:
D16 wrote:
Tripwire22 wrote:Ill offer Feedback to anyone who comments on my news songs Heaven and Dub Jungle
Heaven sounds wicked.
Dub jungle is cool, too.
But the beginning bass sounds a bit.. distorted? dunno.
And you could've probably chosen other toms (Don't really know what they are.)
Now do my track ;D
yeah idk what happen to the bass in the beginning and i couldnt fix that but w.e.

your song is actually very professional everything is really together though what are the vocals saying i cant understand them. the bring that beat back drop is intense
Although it feels like the wobble is a bit too obvious.
It really sticks out.
Should've put it a little bit lower in the mix.
yeah, the wobble also sounds kind of cheap, compared to the other parts of the song. spice it up or lower it down i would say

Posted: Mon Aug 03, 2009 12:29 pm
by heidi m.
This just strictly for dubstep? Not even sure what you'd call this but it's the first track i've finished for a while and wanna know if i'm doin' anything right/wrong. ANY feed back would be more than welcome. Peace.

http://soundcloud.com/heidi-m/parrallax-scroller-draft

Posted: Mon Aug 03, 2009 12:39 pm
by d16
HEiDi M. wrote:This just strictly for dubstep? Not even sure what you'd call this but it's the first track i've finished for a while and wanna know if i'm doin' anything right/wrong. ANY feed back would be more than welcome. Peace.

http://soundcloud.com/heidi-m/parrallax-scroller-draft
It seems to be some sort of... House/dance?
Quite nice tbh!

Posted: Mon Aug 03, 2009 12:59 pm
by heidi m.
Hehe, Nice one =)

Posted: Mon Aug 03, 2009 1:33 pm
by aspect-dubz
D16 wrote:
rectaldubz wrote:just finished up a track called captivation, i used burial's drum beat from archangel just to tell you now, ANY FEEDBACK would make my day/night thanks:
http://soundcloud.com/rectaldubz
ask for a 320 if you want one
I get a "Oops, looks like we can't find that page!"

This is my 1st ever Dubstep track.
http://soundcloud.com/d16/d16-0167
D16 - 0167
Comments?
oh yeh whoops i forgot about that i changed profile name therefore having to change my myspace, soundcloud and all that shit heres my new soundcloud in the sig

Posted: Tue Aug 04, 2009 12:45 am
by tripwire22
rectaldubz wrote:just finished up a track called captivation, i used burial's drum beat from archangel just to tell you now, ANY FEEDBACK would make my day/night thanks:
http://soundcloud.com/rectaldubz
ask for a 320 if you want one
So i like the track its groovy but i think u need to bring the wooden click sounds in the mix up unlesss thats just my shitty head fones.

I kinda need feed back on my new songs in relation to my old songs cuz i tried making mid range cack sounds on Habits and Bad Intentions and wanna kno if they sound better then my other tracks

Of course ill offer feedback to anyone who responds

www.myspace.com/trpwr

Posted: Tue Aug 04, 2009 1:30 am
by aspect-dubz
Tripwire22 wrote:
rectaldubz wrote:just finished up a track called captivation, i used burial's drum beat from archangel just to tell you now, ANY FEEDBACK would make my day/night thanks:
http://soundcloud.com/rectaldubz
ask for a 320 if you want one
So i like the track its groovy but i think u need to bring the wooden click sounds in the mix up unlesss thats just my shitty head fones.

I kinda need feed back on my new songs in relation to my old songs cuz i tried making mid range cack sounds on Habits and Bad Intentions and wanna kno if they sound better then my other tracks

Of course ill offer feedback to anyone who responds

www.myspace.com/trpwr
no i understand what you mean now, thanks, i gave two of your tunes a listen i like the one illumination it's got a nice kinda hip hop feel to it which is cool and i also listened to bad intentions, its sounding good but the synth/bass could maybe do with some more punch and you could throw in some high hats or something. :wink:

Posted: Tue Aug 04, 2009 5:40 am
by Arshaw
hey, can any one give me feedback on my new tune...

work in progress n all that... mix is a bit off

its called Distance,

www.myspace.com/KidKuduro

had to upload to myspace, soundcload limit reached... :?

will give feedback in rtrn, obv 8)

Posted: Tue Aug 04, 2009 1:56 pm
by jbird22
Yo,

Thought i'd post up this new track of mine

"Breaking Skulls"

the tracks got more of a hip hop vibe 2 it rather then dubstep especially with the redman acapella I put on it.

Its up on myspace 1st track. 320's on request (with or without the acapella).

Some feedback would be great.

P.s. make sure u listen 2 it with a sub

Peace!

Posted: Tue Aug 04, 2009 4:16 pm
by 86.
HEiDi M. wrote:This just strictly for dubstep? Not even sure what you'd call this but it's the first track i've finished for a while and wanna know if i'm doin' anything right/wrong. ANY feed back would be more than welcome. Peace.

http://soundcloud.com/heidi-m/parrallax-scroller-draft
good vibes here.

noticeable thing: to me, it doesnt seem like you tried to make a big ass lound tune, super-limiting. that's good. it breathes.

I like the panning you did with the drums.

the wobble, I don't know...could be tuned down slightly....I don't mean like detune, but something other than that. Although it does leave the mix which is nice.


props though! feeling it

Posted: Tue Aug 04, 2009 7:40 pm
by mg civet
New project from Finland!!! MG Civet;
http://www.myspace.com/mgcivet

Every piece of comments are extremely welcome!

Posted: Tue Aug 04, 2009 7:46 pm
by tripwire22
MG Civet wrote:New project from Finland!!! MG Civet;
http://www.myspace.com/mgcivet

Every piece of comments are extremely welcome!
The 2 tracks you got are actually really good i dig the electro mixings you have on the tracks

Posted: Wed Aug 05, 2009 1:06 am
by ianfm
Just finished arranging this, what do you guys think?
http://dl-client.getdropbox.com/u/71572 ... la%204.mp3