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This is my first released tune feat. Foshizzle, and i would really like some feedback on it :

http://soundcloud.com/diktator/diktator ... lide-cut-2

Diktator wrote:This is my first released tune feat. Foshizzle, and i would really like some feedback on it :

http://soundcloud.com/diktator/diktator ... lide-cut-2

Hiya:

-Props on the main bass noise, that is real earth shattering stuff, sounds huuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuggggeeeeeeee
-First minute is really cool and epic feeling, like War of the Worlds or summat with martians invading all that
-Between first minute and break down track loses its way, those variations weren't drastic enough to make me turn my head, but changed from the first section enough to spoil my rhythm
-The hi-hats are the only thing that cut through the devastating bass and when I was nodding my head it was going down on the kick and up on the hat, to pick up the beat if an interesting rhythm were beaten out on that hat it would add to the tension nicely

Overall, quality noise engineering, but could do with some work on composition and variation in drums to keep it spicy all the way through.

ItsK wrote:Soundcloud

Quite a few nice ideas in this one, the beat was nice and distictive, but the mix was just horrible, wayyyyy too much high end - are you mixing in terrible headphones or just too many amphetamines?

Come back to that and adjust your mix and try again as tbh I had to stop listening after about 2 and a half minutes becuase it was starting to hurt, would not be enjoying it if I was hearing that on a clubs sound system at all :/

We Bang wrote:Soundcloud

pretty much finished at last! Enjoy!!!

Erm, well, what can I say - the production is top notch, sounds professional imo. The changes in pace keep you listening butttt..........

...........without being rude (?) go produce hardcore or something they'd love you, songs got no space or pace to qualify as dubstep imo, and although all the chord progressions etc. are lovely, it all comes off as a bit cheesy. Sorry for being a bit harsh I feel kinda bad, but the song hasn't really got much soul to it. Also the reversed effect gets a bit raped, used sparingly could have been a nice change.

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SesG wrote:

We Bang wrote:Soundcloud

pretty much finished at last! Enjoy!!!

Erm, well, what can I say - the production is top notch, sounds professional imo. The changes in pace keep you listening butttt..........

...........without being rude (?) go produce hardcore or something they'd love you, songs got no space or pace to qualify as dubstep imo, and although all the chord progressions etc. are lovely, it all comes off as a bit cheesy. Sorry for being a bit harsh I feel kinda bad, but the song hasn't really got much soul to it. Also the reversed effect gets a bit raped, used sparingly could have been a nice change.

No worries on being rude. The track is for the dance floor and the ravers. If you listen to my other tunes you would see. I kinda just like to make a variety of stuff. Thanks for the input though.

Fassyman: loving your tracks man, if only the main wobble could've been just a tad louder, and the sub just abit stonger, it would've been a perfect chillout track.

BananaBomber: Fat bass you got going there, nice track , but I'm missing a lead synth in the main parts of your song.


Lookin for some feedback here, because apparently no mather how much you help out others in the WIP thread they only seem to care about their own tracks

CollisionCourse wrote:Soundcloud

Absolutely loved this tune 2bh, the bass is brilliant! Loved the 2nd drop! The percussion really fits in so perfectly around the bassline. Nice work oon the outro too, i love the way the bass throbs behind the percussion.

BananaBomber wrote:Soundcloud

Woah, been a while since i've heard some decent filth! Sick tune, i love the frequent intervals in the bassline, really keeps me wanting to listen for more. The 2nd drop is brilliant, this tune really doesn't get repetitive at all. Will have to start following you on SC.

fassyman wrote:Soundcloud

Perfect job on the percussion with this tune man, the feel to this tune just sounds so right, the flute that comes in around 1:22 is such a brilliant touch! A deeper sub would add alot but i really do love this tune. Someone else i'll have to start following on Soundcloud aha.

Here are two new tracks of mine anyways:

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yes peep check my new 8 finished tracks all on the youtube channel would like as much feedback as poss good or bad. its pretty dirty shit lol ive bin makin dub for bout a year on fruity 8 and i got a midi controller at xmas aswel. enjjoy and add me
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EWTjXczft2Y#
also got a myspace
www.myspace.com/fekyoself

cheers

Here are two new tracks of mine anyways:

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Both two very chilling tracks. The first thing that poped in my mind is for second track, you could maybe use a snare (a very little one to go along with your style somewhere in the second part after ... the ... well the chill down, IMO it would add even more grooveness.

Hellomadame wrote:

Both two very chilling tracks. The first thing that poped in my mind is for second track, you could maybe use a snare (a very little one to go along with your style somewhere in the second part after ... the ... well the chill down, IMO it would add even more grooveness.

Nice idea man, thanks for the feedback.

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easy all, got another one in need of some constructive criticism/review.
techno feel to it, probabably influenced by all basic channel ive been listening too recently.

thanks!

i smoke too much

Hey guys, check this out feedback will be returned. promise


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http://www.myspace.com/heretiknb

Thanks!

HeretiK wrote:Hey guys, check this out feedback will be returned. promise


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Overall, i think it sounds great. I personally would've put a little more randomness...some kind of spontaneous variation here and there in the track just to keep people from getting bored. The wobble i hear around 2:40 is better than the wobble i hear at 2:17 (that one needs a little more low end and less high end sound in my opinion). But i'm just being nit-picky or i just feel like i gotta give some kinda helpful feedback - overall, the track sounds really good in my ears.

Here's a track i need some feedback on:

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It's almost all in korean language, but most of it actually isn't really grammatical language anywayz. Here's the music vid too:

@ worker ant: i think its got a cool idea behind it, its just a tad too random in my opinion. maybe try using the voices in build up sections before dropping to a more rhythmic idea? or you could try going for a more traditional verse-chorus-verse, etc idea; having the voice bits as the 'verse' then introducing some form of melodic lead line to act as a 'chorus'. the editing on the voices is done nicely, and the track itself is well produced





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Another attempt at gettin some feedback <3 :

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Boyaahhh! would love some feedback on this one duudes!

http://soundcloud.com/foshizzle/rubadub-w-diktator