Akoma wrote:Keep at it man, not sure if you have monitors, if not get some
@LordBid - Alone : Nice & Mellow really chilled out vibe with this I like it. Would like something else in there i´m just not sure what. Can´t knock it though I enjoyed what I heard [/quote="Akoma"]
hey thanks dude I know what u mean i too have a feeling like I don't know whats missing from that one...
do you want feedback on either of your two tracks in your sig?
Go ahead!!!!
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010
Posted: Wed May 12, 2010 7:09 pm
by Akoma
FourEyez wrote:Finished this today after working on it for a few days, it's my first track
feedback would be highly appreciated, many thanks.
FourEyez
Not bad at all mate, like the original bassline but not keen on the bit that drops in now and then, seems to loud espessially when it´s put together with the string section half way through.
A nice lead and Sub wouldn´t go a miss either and might help spice up the bassline. Good work though keep at it.
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010
Posted: Wed May 12, 2010 9:13 pm
by FourEyez
Akoma wrote:
FourEyez wrote:Finished this today after working on it for a few days, it's my first track
feedback would be highly appreciated, many thanks.
FourEyez
Not bad at all mate, like the original bassline but not keen on the bit that drops in now and then, seems to loud espessially when it´s put together with the string section half way through.
A nice lead and Sub wouldn´t go a miss either and might help spice up the bassline. Good work though keep at it.
Cheers for the feedback mate, cheers!
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010
Posted: Thu May 13, 2010 12:50 am
by urbannerd62
hey hey everyone! got a new one in need of some review.
will be back here to give some reviews on some of your content, just don't have too much time till work and i need to get my ass off the computer!
urbannerd62 wrote:hey hey everyone! got a new one in need of some review.
will be back here to give some reviews on some of your content, just don't have too much time till work and i need to get my ass off the computer!
Soundcloud
This is my new track (Sine Flu)
i just uploaded thi one...
i started this one early this week...
well i 've had the flu all week a the original bass was a sine but change it though the name was cool and decided to keep it so (sine Flu)
see what you think
all feed back are welcome!
thanks.
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010
Posted: Thu May 13, 2010 12:39 pm
by abe_froman
urbannerd62 wrote:hey hey everyone! got a new one in need of some review.
will be back here to give some reviews on some of your content, just don't have too much time till work and i need to get my ass off the computer!
Real nice! Gotta sick grooove, maybe abit too much echo on some of your drums can get sorta annoying... But that's personal preference more than owt. Big ups! And better than owt i cud do
This one is the next track from my forth coming EP: 'Short Circuit EP'
Enjoy
Insane tune.
Love the breaks, love the pads, love the bass!
as was mentioned before, the vox maybe a little quiet.
Great work, whens it up for grabs?
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010
Posted: Thu May 13, 2010 4:05 pm
by ASu
Anyone care to give the tune in my sig a listen? I've probably spent around 50 hours just tweaking the damn thing trying to get the levels just right. Im a bit of a newbie at producing so any trips and tricks are welcome.
It's more on the deeper side, turn your subs up and tell me what you think! I'll listen to anything you've got in return.
urbannerd62 wrote:hey hey everyone! got a new one in need of some review.
will be back here to give some reviews on some of your content, just don't have too much time till work and i need to get my ass off the computer!
Absolute tune dude. Listened to the whole thing and i barely do that in these threads.
Yeah that track is awesome!! Nice switch up at the drop man, intelligent shit!!
Aaaaanyways, this is my first post ever, lurked for sometime and learnt a lot of my dubstep production skills here. Got a new track up (second attempt at dubstep) and its sounding okay, any feedback would be much appreciated!! http://soundcloud.com/phallic-mcdynamit ... od-beetles (ps how do you embed a track as your signature? sorry for the n00b-like question =/)
thanks for all the feedback guys! may has been a busy month for me with the coming of a new job and finals in school so I haven't been able to spend as much time on my productions and on the production forum as I'd like to, but thanks nevertheless!
@ Deranger - Mimosa the Day After ; see what you mean by an R&B vibe! me being a fan of sexy groovy tunes, gotta give you props on this one. some clever synth sounds that fit perfect into the theme of the song. my advice would be spice up the track a bit more. it comes off a bit naked as it progresses if that makes any sense. id try throwing in some lush pads or samples, maybe sidechain them to give the tune some extra 'oomph'. drums could use some more work too. good job!
@Nellon - Decay ; feelin the drums, the atmospere on this one is heavy. nice use of delay to give an eerie feel. Id give the snare a bit of reverb to compliment that eerie feel. sub is fat, props mang!
@abe_froman/joeheppy - vandross ; sick tune! intro is fuckin ace, build up progresses so smoothly, and that sample is sick! the drums that lead into the drop are dope and the drums that playout throughout the song are nice too. played this one back like 3 times, good shit dude
@thierry_le_dj - sine flu ; pretty cool tune, lfo's are sounding pretty cool. nice synth bits thrown in there are dope, and the breaks are cool too. i like!
@worker ant - change gonna come cover ; intro was sick, love that vocal. only thing Id object is how the beat keeps stopping, would confuse me from a DJ's point of view. this would be really tough to mix, but from a listening point of view, not bad
@FourEyes - the-vicar ; sick tune dude, would have to agree akoma, when its all together it's comes off very loud. had to turn down my headphones haha. the string section is dope. id rework the mixdown so that it doesn't play so loudly, and add some sort of variation on the second drop. other than that, you did a pretty good job on this one.
@k00sh - vendettafinal ; should spice up the drums. gets annoying hearing the same drum pattern throughout the whole song. the lfo's are soundin nice though. sub is pretty nice too.
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010
Posted: Fri May 14, 2010 5:14 am
by abe_froman
urbannerd62 wrote:
@abe_froman/joeheppy - vandross ; sick tune! intro is fuckin ace, build up progresses so smoothly, and that sample is sick! the drums that lead into the drop are dope and the drums that playout throughout the song are nice too. played this one back like 3 times, good shit dude
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yoooooo big up for the feedback man!
Glad you liked ive left you feedback on your soundcloud page as its easier to leave timed comments (and looks way cooler when you have bare comments haha)
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010
Posted: Fri May 14, 2010 7:26 am
by KidQw3rty
two fully finished track from the forthcoming ep. one is an update of a track I've previously posted. feedback comin soonsoonsoon...i finish school up tomorrow! Soundcloud Soundcloud