@jizzman
i am not sure about the intro its hard to judge cause its obviously an idea tune. the groove developes real nice at parts and destructs itself again which might work actually
but i think you could raise the overall impact of the tune.
i do feel those lofi samples maybe work them into the tune even more like old skipping vhs sounds and stuff
@mason
you got your percs down. dig them but maybe you could introduce the melodies a tad later. you know like start with the percs and build upon them. i do dig the melodies when it dropped. but theres this high yoshiesc sound not sure if its the riught kind of sound for the tune like the whole sound
tbh i think you could strip the whole tune down even more and really build upon those nice percussion grooves. yeah i think if oyu build the up the percussion real nice and introduce the first two melodies way into the tune could have a way bigger impact than they have now
@yilan
again not sure about the intro. always tuff for me to get into a tune that starts with the drums. i do feel this bass sound. i personally would even go for a higher pitched vocal jsut to raise the stresslevel
when it drops it definitly has a nice flow going. as you said you could mix it dif add some lowend some roughness etc
i do like those panning percussion sounds
but i think you take away some of the stress you created earlier i would like atune that really builds up until it goes into a intersection especially in this one with this nice stab bass sound
i feel those wierd melodies toward the end bring them earlier or mke them more prominent overall
yeah i would say raise the stresslevel somehow and you got sth nice here
@zosomagik
again not real sure about the hi hats rigth away but its not too bad
develops real nice when it drops. bassline is nice. you could def even layer a sub underneath the bass
the strings add alot maybe give them a touch of reverb or delay sth to flow into the break the create
i like the vocals i think not sure it works with or without them i would say
yea overall a bit more power and its nice
@cc74
nice synthsounds
dig this bassline has a wierd but ncie interaction of melodies. not sure about this break at 1.03
and the stuttering melodies afterwards i like the soudns you used in the break though
maybe drop into silence after the riser
or like the tail it has and introduce the drums more friendly again
yeah i think when you drop right with the bassline again it might be smoother or jsut one melody in the buildup
but overall def dig what you got there
sorry for ranting abit but all in good attentions