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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Mon Apr 12, 2010 2:00 pm
by donpablo
a few words about this would be nice ;]
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Mon Apr 12, 2010 5:13 pm
by projekt
very tidy tune mate. great intro, great build up and a sick drop. good in terms of EQ aswell
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Feedback on my latest would be appreciated

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Mon Apr 12, 2010 6:04 pm
by Brero
donpablo wrote:a few words about this would be nice ;]
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Great intro, i agree with the EQ comment aswel, sounds sick!
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Mon Apr 12, 2010 6:10 pm
by Brero
projekt wrote:very tidy tune mate. great intro, great build up and a sick drop. good in terms of EQ aswell
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Feedback on my latest would be appreciated

Yeah this is sweet, the bassline is sick, good work on the pitch bend bits aswel - if that makes sense ahaha.
I like the drums aswel, they maintain a good driving rhythm through the track - again if that makes sense haha

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Mon Apr 12, 2010 6:14 pm
by Brero
Ok, here's my effort...
I did this track last month and i don't know what else to do with it, i don't know where to take it, i think it could be made better, i just don't know what to include (maybe even take out)...
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any ideas anyone?
Thanks in advance!
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Mon Apr 12, 2010 8:43 pm
by dazprospect
My first track, be gentle!
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2010 12:25 am
by jstick
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This track is killing me! The hardest I've worked on getting the bass sounding right..
Loving it though, so fun.
Check it.
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2010 12:52 am
by kontigobeats
Some nice melodic synths and bassline in this one!
Am looking to get it mixed and mastered properly to put out so any feedback appreciated and returned!
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2010 4:35 am
by dubplateguy
@kontigobeats- Im liking the aloof drum beat at the beginning, also the drop if fairly groovy, the synth sounds pretty awesome. Just a suggestion, you could possible add some more volume and grime to your wobbles, but thats just my style. Solid segway into the slow part, all in all a pretty solid song.
@jstick- Really digging the old sample at the start, makes for a cool build up to the drop. The breakdown is super dope, its filthy and I really like the cool sounding basses you used. I would just keep adding to this song, because it's already sounding really good.
@dazprospect- The spacy beginning on this track is pretty cool, I like next part, its got some cool sounding synth. You could possibly speed up the synth to match the sped up drum beat, it might sound good. I like the sample before the second drop, very dark. This is a fairly solid song all around, nice work so far.
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2010 6:34 am
by _boring
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2010 9:32 am
by ouro
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I just have registered here. Give me some advices please.
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2010 9:51 am
by dazprospect
dubplateguy wrote:
@dazprospect- The spacy beginning on this track is pretty cool, I like next part, its got some cool sounding synth. You could possibly speed up the synth to match the sped up drum beat, it might sound good. I like the sample before the second drop, very dark. This is a fairly solid song all around, nice work so far.
Thanks for the kind words! Appreciate it alot. I think i'll stick at it abit longer and try and go somewhere else with it at the end. My first attempt with really EQing stuff and that, deffinitely makes more difference than i thought to the final product!
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2010 11:11 am
by Karanp
kintigobeats - nice tune i'm really liking it, pretty sweet melody. keep it up!
jstick - i don't really like the vocal sample :S The drums need to be louder, and you need to turn the wobbles down a little bit. Work on fixing the mix.
New tune i'm working on lol. Vocal samples are from Armand Van Helden - The Boogie Monster. Feedback would be awesome
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2010 12:23 pm
by jstick
dubplateguy wrote:
@jstick- Really digging the old sample at the start, makes for a cool build up to the drop. The breakdown is super dope, its filthy and I really like the cool sounding basses you used. I would just keep adding to this song, because it's already sounding really good.
far.
Nice one mate, Still working on it! Thanks for the feedback.
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2010 12:40 pm
by zonetrooper5
projekt wrote:very tidy tune mate. great intro, great build up and a sick drop. good in terms of EQ aswell
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Feedback on my latest would be appreciated

Liking this track, bassline is pretty awesome, although at some parts it seems like clipping or there is are two parts of the bassline together making it louder than it should be. The drums are sounding great, really keeps the rhythm going throughout the song and the pads fit the song well.
donpablo wrote:a few words about this would be nice ;]
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I agree with the others here, the intro is great, in terms of EQ is good as well, I suggest you should finish this song since your on to something.
dazprospect wrote:My first track, be gentle!
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Not bad for a first song, better than my first song.
You got some great rhythm going on with the drums which I like alot, when the bassline kicks in, it needs to be thicker, could try splitting it into three different frequencies, such as high, mid and low, then put some chorus or flanger on the high as well as highpassing the high bassline. For the mids, put some distortion on it, reverb etc whatever works with the track. Then for the low bass, lowpass it then add a saturator to thicken it up. Keep trying though, you will only get better if you keep on making songs and practicing.
Heres my song that I've been working on, the buildup is a bit wank and the bassline could use some work but bugger it, feedback would be great just tell me what is shit and whats good.
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2010 12:56 pm
by donpablo
thanks for feedback everybody,just need to fix the wobble volumes and that shit that is out of sync on the 32nd bar,the splif last nigh must be fucked up my ears haha

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2010 4:41 pm
by BLAHBLAHJAH
projekt wrote:very tidy tune mate. great intro, great build up and a sick drop. good in terms of EQ aswell
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Feedback on my latest would be appreciated

Digging this track man, got a nice blend of voices. One thing I thought was for the bars around 2:20... Maybe make that set more driving... Some loose suggestions, carry on a big bass swell from the break at 2:13 through it all, maybe cut out the higher pitched lfo noise through that part too, then kick it all back in with the last drop
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2010 4:44 pm
by BLAHBLAHJAH
Astral wrote:Finally got my creative juices flowing again, and for some reason producing an entirely different kind of dub to my usual.
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Just the bare bones at the moment.
Feeling this one most deff! You made any more progress with it? The main bar is an invitation to get a frequency automation line going!
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2010 4:54 pm
by dustyspeakers
Nice tune Don Pablo
The bassline is sick, i like that horn noise in it aswell. keep at it!!!!!!!!!
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2010 5:11 pm
by dustyspeakers
cool everyone this is a new tune i made its pretty ambient with gritty bass
I like it but i would love some feedback that would be as sweet as a nut
cheers
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