Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for NOVEMBER, 2010
Posted: Sun Nov 14, 2010 3:02 am
good luck getting feedback lmaosuperginger wrote:TYPING WHILE LISTENING + typing after hearing the whole tune
#amphibian
nice and sensitive pad.. it's perfectly EQ'd. hats are nice.. it really fits in with the intro. the drop holds up to the great quality of the introgood choice of drums.. I like the synths and the pads... they sound like they are in a distance. but you should really cut down breakdown. intro length is fine, but more drop would be appriciated! good tune overall
#mindcontrol
groovy. turn up the volume though. make a more interesting drop, I'd think it would sound cool if you had some permanent pad or bassline... doesnt have to be aggressive but I think your track lacks presence. I think your work is quite interesting though! would be fun to hear the final product
#Grok
yeayeaaaa I like this kina of rude style in the introI don't like britney spears at all... but this was cool as hell.. really unique production mate! I like the shouts or w/e they are... but please don't abuse them in the drop. I'd say every 4 bars or maybe every other bar for a short time. every 8 bars might just do the trick.
#goldorak
wow... nice tirbal drums/percs or what should I call them?I think the track is quite groovy... I liek when the piano drops in unexpected! but I'd might pump the tune with more melodical elements.. but if you think it's good the way you made it, I think you should stick with it!!
BTW! the nice indian(?) singing is wicked! you should bring it in the first drop too.
#aranha
I like the lead ALOT in the intro. but the melody is just too cheesey and lame.. :/ (sorry)! I really admire your mixing, since you are so new with producing! drop is not too cooltry making it intersting by automating the lfo speed and add a filter to get some cool sounds to variate a bit!
second drop is alot better then the first... you managed to get a anice structure of the song, I can imagine you will produce som bangers later on when you got more experience.
#hutyluty
hmm.. nice ideas for the intro, but to repetitive. you must fix that!!! dude... I think you can fix the track... but right now it's just giving me a headache. btw, I don't really know what you are trying accomplish? which genre? chill with the snare. use it 1/8 beat. add a melodic synth/lead or instrument too. I don't want to be rude or mean, I just want to help.. so don't take my feedback as something negative!
#weedcali
thx for feedback!![]()
sweet intro. a bit scary bellarpeggio therecool! you should put the drop after the synthrise (0.28-0.56), and use the second part of the intro for the breakdown or something. I like the beastly drop. sickly well made, it's like a mix of traditonal rusko/caspa bassline with a modern touch from new producers! keep it up mate
best track so far! and I mean it
#jak-a-tron
not my cup of tea... so it gets ard to give feedback. nice vibes and I like your work. cool snare, but decrease the reeverb with just a bit.
#nicorisine
nice beat. while equalizing that bassline, I would add some more freq at the 250hz knob. (the regular bass in parametric EQ). Nice ideas though... finish it off
FOR YOU WHO DIDN'T TRUST MY ETHICS
I know it sucks with people just dropping their tracks and expecting feedback without giving to others. I hope you are all satisfied with the feedback I gave and i would appriciate some on my track too. it's a work in progress, a dubstep/triphop remix of "Notorious B.I.G. - Party and Bullshit". I perosnally think this remix got a bit of potential and I really wanna finish it off nicely. I've been having some thoughts about it and I think I will add some more reeverb to fill in the presence in teh drop. might add some more sub to drop too since a few commented it. please give me some more feedback on this one! MADLY appriciatedalright, here it is!
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might actually take a listen because you seem pretty chill about your shit