Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JANUARY, 2011
Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2011 10:19 pm
@Astral - I would probably a get a bit more down before asking for feedback - as you'll probably get a lot of "incomplete, blargh!" lol. I generally like the riff you're using, but there's way too much reverb/stereo widening on those synths.
@nylie - that intro is dope, love it. Probably a bit too long though. I love that heavy-delayed stab you got going on around the tune. Nice rim shot/woodblock snare as well.
@kidstrange - really interesting arrangement you got going on. I feel like the drums need a bit more punch. I'd probably compress the lot (NY compression) together, as it all feels rather separate atm.
@weecali - there's a lot of sub in this track so I can't give much feedback at this point (on shitty headphones at work), but the production and arrangement is very, very nice. Very soulful, feel like i should be at a jazz club sipping on wine and watching some woman on stage sing her heart out. Good work
@paravrais - not sure what to think of charmander. I think it needs a lot more work. Drums don't really fit with the sounds used imo, or maybe the other way around. Arrangement and general song structure is good, kept me interested. The reese-style bass that comes in around 1.23 is actually a really nice switch up. That snare - you need to layer it with a clap and some other samples I think it needs more impact. I'd also vary it somewhat.
Run Around update in sig.
@nylie - that intro is dope, love it. Probably a bit too long though. I love that heavy-delayed stab you got going on around the tune. Nice rim shot/woodblock snare as well.
@kidstrange - really interesting arrangement you got going on. I feel like the drums need a bit more punch. I'd probably compress the lot (NY compression) together, as it all feels rather separate atm.
@weecali - there's a lot of sub in this track so I can't give much feedback at this point (on shitty headphones at work), but the production and arrangement is very, very nice. Very soulful, feel like i should be at a jazz club sipping on wine and watching some woman on stage sing her heart out. Good work

@paravrais - not sure what to think of charmander. I think it needs a lot more work. Drums don't really fit with the sounds used imo, or maybe the other way around. Arrangement and general song structure is good, kept me interested. The reese-style bass that comes in around 1.23 is actually a really nice switch up. That snare - you need to layer it with a clap and some other samples I think it needs more impact. I'd also vary it somewhat.
Run Around update in sig.