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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for February, 2011
Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2011 9:39 am
by FRasch
Thanks for all the feedback! Awesome stuff. Will try to tweak and alter the synth melody slightly later on tonight

Will give some more feedback on the latest wip's here when I get back home from work.. dubstep and pc speakers = failure.

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for February, 2011
Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2011 9:55 am
by _boring
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for February, 2011
Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2011 10:29 am
by oprs
oprs wrote:kushmane- really like the drums. i think the different speeds will help. needs some killer bass going on though.
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for February, 2011
Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2011 2:38 pm
by HomeNoiseRecord
thanks to everyone who gave feedback, the tunes are now well and truly done.
For anyone who wants to have alisten, iv also remixed Black Sabbaths Sweet Leaf over the weekend. Thats gonna be in my sig.
cheers again everyone!! i feel like im improving all the time thanks to you guys
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for February, 2011
Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2011 5:00 pm
by Captain Planet
I had an attempt at some mixing, can I get some thoughts?
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for February, 2011
Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2011 5:35 pm
by CoreyGoesRawr
HomeNoiseRecord- I know you weren't asking for feedback but that's probably the first good rockstep track I've heard
oprs- pretty nice man good vibes
kushhmane- how bout them Packers?

Good start man it kinda feels like its lacking energy I think automating your lfo's it will really help.
Psythe- pretty cool man but def work on the mix it got kind of hard to hear everything at some points.
captain planet- sounds much better man
ok here is the rework of my alpacastep track my biggest concern is the mix I got to the point where my poor little laptop was running out of ram while trying to mix it, I def need a production rig.
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for February, 2011
Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2011 6:21 pm
by oprs
c planet i really like the synth and im usually really choosey when its sounds like that but its sounding nice man keep it up
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for February, 2011
Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2011 6:25 pm
by NICORISONE
@Captain Planet: I was liking this until that wobble stuff just kept the same sound for so long. I would switch it up a bit more with maybe different patterns or something. Just my opinion.
Work in progress intro:
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NOTE: I know you can't really hear the kick or the perc very well, sorting that issue out today but hopefully you cant still get a good idea of where im going.
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for February, 2011
Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2011 6:30 pm
by Captain Planet
@oprs - cheers for the feedback

any ideas whether it needs anything changed? or dya reckon it sounds pretty good as a finished track? that "swallow" tune isn't the kinda sound i'd normally listen to, but its realy a nice, moody number! the drums alone <3
@nicorisone - thanks, i'll have a look, i can definitey see what you mean! as for your intro, it sounds pretty good, but (just my opinion) im not really feeling how upbeat it sounds? idk if you get me?
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for February, 2011
Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2011 9:00 pm
by HomeNoiseRecord
CoreyGoesRawr wrote:HomeNoiseRecord- I know you weren't asking for feedback but that's probably the first good rockstep track I've heard
Your too kind!! Considering I only did this in under 24 hours im getting scarily good feedback, maybe iv found my niche

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for February, 2011
Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2011 9:51 pm
by CoreyGoesRawr
HomeNoiseRecord wrote:CoreyGoesRawr wrote:HomeNoiseRecord- I know you weren't asking for feedback but that's probably the first good rockstep track I've heard
Your too kind!! Considering I only did this in under 24 hours im getting scarily good feedback, maybe iv found my niche

always the funnest when its fresh in your head. You could totally be the pioneer of what ever it would be called well unless someone else already is lol
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for February, 2011
Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2011 11:27 pm
by FRasch
So many sweet tunes in progress!
kushhmane:
I think that melody is just insane! I am not sure I agree with what happens when the loop changes tbh, but that first part of the loop is just off the hook.
This song defo needs more bass tho, you kinda have to fix the bass on this... for humanity.

I like the wobbly synth sounds except from 2.46 there, sounds like an unfinished part of the song and doesn't add anything to it imho.
This tune has the potential to be sick!
HomeNoiseRecord:
Cool project. Not exactly my cup of tee, but well done! I think the lfo'd synth and the guitar blends nicely into the mix. I dont like the little "meep" sound that pops every now and again during the guitar playing tho. Actually thought my cat was outside trying to get in

Creative and original stuff this tho. Kudos!
Oprs:
I like the sound and vibe on this one. One of the things I dig about this place is that it opens my eyes/ears to other subgenres of dubstep that I normally wouldn't have found or listened to. This being one of those songs. Really nice tune I think. Could've been longer
NICORISONE:
I thought it sounded a bit unfinished and was bout to suggest using it as an intro untill I noticed it was meant to be an intro

I think it is more or less perfect as it is. Sweet vocal sample and nice timing on when he starts and stops talking, I think.
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for February, 2011
Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2011 11:47 pm
by tbunreal
@barbearik Great intro but EQ your synths a little to remove some of that muddy lower end
@MRP5 Awesome very original, but I think you could improve on the melody, make it a little bouncier if you know what I mean.
@jamiecypher Cool drop I like the pauses, but you need to beef up your sounds more.(including percussion)
And now heres my guy I;ve been working on for a couple of days.
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for February, 2011
Posted: Tue Feb 08, 2011 12:53 am
by CrispinX
yo what up stuntman.
aha digging the samples.
laid-back tune.
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for February, 2011
Posted: Tue Feb 08, 2011 1:05 am
by Asterix
Srry guys i am quite in the rush and just wanted to post something real quick ...i will give feedback in a mater of hours i just need to get to a interview real quick ...as you can see from earlier posts i do give back feedback peoples
Thanks guys pls comment if you want on soundcloud and/or follow peace
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for February, 2011
Posted: Tue Feb 08, 2011 11:05 am
by nibzdub
SUP guys :}
right been fucking around with my tune alot lately, took out a couple of build ups and breaks, thought it didn't flow properly with them in there. here's what i have come up with yet again lol..
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let me know what y'all think
@ Asterix, tune is fucking sweet man, love the build up. when it drops i think the bass synth is a little over powering, not sure may be just me. anyway noice work mate :}
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for February, 2011
Posted: Tue Feb 08, 2011 12:30 pm
by p3rt2k8
http://www.4shared.com/audio/Rs3sZVt1/Prove_It.html
my current project, using reason 5 too, tell me what ya think. If anyone wants to remix it, or do a vs or collob with it just let me know. im also looking for music heads to chat with on msn, collabs and stuff.
p3rt2k8@hotmail.com
my music facebook, Luke Thbprodz Pert.

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for February, 2011
Posted: Tue Feb 08, 2011 12:58 pm
by wabble
@nibzdub like the drum pattern.. maybe a little more wobble girth use of stereo field?
@Captain Planet good mix.. beef up that kick around 60-80Hz nice wobble i like the in/out of quantization
@-boring nice sub bass.. very present.. very good mix too
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for February, 2011
Posted: Tue Feb 08, 2011 1:04 pm
by wabble
@Asterix holy shit wasnt ready for that one.. solid mate.. add some light fx sends to the wobble and eq out some of those masking tones should be proper
@ CoreyGoesRawr could be bigger, beef up that mix

@NICORISONE compress ur sub bass
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for February, 2011
Posted: Tue Feb 08, 2011 1:04 pm
by wabble
@oprs this ones different.. i like where its going.. well mixed too
@HomeNoiseRecord dope sampling.. maybe cut some of the 250-600 out and add some 60 to ur kick imo