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Re: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kNwgNG9FsPg

Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 12:08 am
by amisane
same as I said in the "unfinished tracks" thread:

don't like the trancey arp lead thing... don't like it very much at all, especially for this genre.

bass is alright, sounds a bit generic though.

whole thing seems lacking depth. dubstep is about the vibes in my opinion, and the speed off all the elements of this track make it sound like it is rushing, and not got that laid back feel.

snare is quite weedy. although that could be youtube compression at its finest.

Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 12:09 am
by amisane
here's a tune I did, feedback would be ace :)

http://www.foxdubs.com/mp3/Fox-swelling.mp3

Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 4:43 am
by Ronaldo Vetro
http://soundcloud.com/ronaldo-vetro/super-sync

Please give me some feedback!!!

I´m Brazilian producer and i don´t have dubstep parties to go to or friends that r into dubstep...your comment is welcome!!!!

Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 8:39 am
by bifta

Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 1:58 pm
by louissmusic
amisane wrote:here's a tune I did, feedback would be ace :)

http://www.foxdubs.com/mp3/Fox-swelling.mp3
That was very nice to listen to :) big tune, the beat was great had a nice groove also liking the reversed ambient sounds nd the vocals were great! did you use melodyne? Very nice, any chance of a 320?

Louis

any chance you could give me track some feedback?


Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 10:05 pm
by antihero
antihero wrote: I have couple of new tunes with a roots vibe at http://www.myspace.com/slakadubstep

First one is a remix of Trample the Eagle, the Dragon and the Bear, an incredible song by Alpha & Omega and Reuben Master on the vocals. It ain't no bootleg either!
Second is a rootsy tune with some dub samples from here and there.

Tell me what you think. Thanks in advance!
Anything to say 'bout these? C'mon!

Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 10:24 pm
by louissmusic
antihero wrote:
antihero wrote: I have couple of new tunes with a roots vibe at http://www.myspace.com/slakadubstep

First one is a remix of Trample the Eagle, the Dragon and the Bear, an incredible song by Alpha & Omega and Reuben Master on the vocals. It ain't no bootleg either!
Second is a rootsy tune with some dub samples from here and there.

Tell me what you think. Thanks in advance!
Anything to say 'bout these? C'mon!
Really liking the style of your tracks man they all sound really heavy nice reggae feel as well. Seriusly makes me feel like sitting in a room filled with smoke with way to many subs just chillin to dub :o nice atmosphere.

Feel free to check out my tracks http://www.youtube.com/user/wastemandubz

Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 11:11 pm
by twistedol
amisane wrote:here's a tune I did, feedback would be ace :)

http://www.foxdubs.com/mp3/Fox-swelling.mp3

THIS TRACK IS WICKED!

Apart from sorting the kick out a bit i CANNOT find fault in this track. Big props to u mate. Its so chilled and 'acoustic' sounding. Such a refreshing sound from midrange ass droppings and wobble.
Only 2 pointers id give on this track are 1) compress the kick a bit - it could be much punchier, 2) if the background noise isnt intended then the recording is a bit noisey.

Mate, if i had a label id sign u fo sho

Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 11:17 pm
by twistedol
bump

Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 11:53 pm
by ishamael
amisane wrote:here's a tune I did, feedback would be ace :)

http://www.foxdubs.com/mp3/Fox-swelling.mp3
i feel this track,
nice atmo and some proper mixing!

Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2009 1:42 am
by tripwire22
Finally made a new song and its been a while since so any opinions would be nice ill offer feedback to anyone who responds :e:

http://www.myspace.com/trpwr

Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2009 2:20 am
by marsonebeatz
new tuneage! post-halloween break/DnB influenced. Feedback Appreciated!

Soundcloud

gooms

Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2009 2:36 am
by marsonebeatz
tripwire22 wrote:Finally made a new song and its been a while since so any opinions would be nice ill offer feedback to anyone who responds :e:

http://www.myspace.com/trpwr
really like that "piano 02" track, whatever one was at the top of your player. those drums were super solid, loved the mixing of them. really fuckin loud mate! def liked that tune!

Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2009 11:04 am
by antihero
louissmusic wrote:
antihero wrote:
antihero wrote: I have couple of new tunes with a roots vibe at http://www.myspace.com/slakadubstep

First one is a remix of Trample the Eagle, the Dragon and the Bear, an incredible song by Alpha & Omega and Reuben Master on the vocals. It ain't no bootleg either!
Second is a rootsy tune with some dub samples from here and there.

Tell me what you think. Thanks in advance!
Anything to say 'bout these? C'mon!
Really liking the style of your tracks man they all sound really heavy nice reggae feel as well. Seriusly makes me feel like sitting in a room filled with smoke with way to many subs just chillin to dub :o nice atmosphere.

Feel free to check out my tracks http://www.youtube.com/user/wastemandubz
I really liked Chill and Casio, some great synths there, but RSPCatstep just made my ears bleed :D too much noise for me.

Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2009 2:30 pm
by elepho
hello!
got a tune i would like you to tell me about. got several on myspace but not sure they have anything to do there...
feel free to tell me about them, anyway.
http://rapidshare.com/files/301390691/f ... m.mp3.html

Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2009 4:34 pm
by mg civet
ishamael wrote:
amisane wrote:here's a tune I did, feedback would be ace :)

http://www.foxdubs.com/mp3/Fox-swelling.mp3
i feel this track,
nice atmo and some proper mixing!
I usually don't like this style of dubstep but this track was really good!!:) NICE!!

Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2009 4:44 pm
by DAYTONA VELASQUEZ
<object height="81" width="100%"> <param name="movie" value="http://player.soundcloud.com/player.swf ... f"></param> <param name="allowscriptaccess" value="always"></param> <embed allowscriptaccess="always" height="81" src="http://player.soundcloud.com/player.swf ... lor=3900ff" type="application/x-shockwave-flash" width="100%"></embed> </object> <span><a href="http://soundcloud.com/d-velasquez/bass- ... ired">BASS IS NOT OPTIONAL (ITS REQUIRED)</a> by <a href="http://soundcloud.com/d-velasquez">d.ve ... </a></span>
<a href="https://www.beatport.com/en-US/html/con ... bp_ban_gen" target="_blank"><img border="0" src="http://promote.beatport.com/img/perform ... e.jpg"></a>

Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2009 5:18 pm
by fassyman
ok i cant make the soundcloud thing work so ive made a myspace...

www.myspace.com/fassyman

yeah this is my first dubstep track so feedback would be sweeeeet

Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2009 5:18 pm
by stappard
DAYTONA VELASQUEZ wrote:<object height="81" width="100%"> <param name="movie" value="http://player.soundcloud.com/player.swf ... f"></param> <param name="allowscriptaccess" value="always"></param> <embed allowscriptaccess="always" height="81" src="http://player.soundcloud.com/player.swf ... lor=3900ff" type="application/x-shockwave-flash" width="100%"></embed> </object> <span><a href="http://soundcloud.com/d-velasquez/bass- ... ired">BASS IS NOT OPTIONAL (ITS REQUIRED)</a> by <a href="http://soundcloud.com/d-velasquez">d.ve ... </a></span>
<a href="https://www.beatport.com/en-US/html/con ... bp_ban_gen" target="_blank"><img border="0" src="http://promote.beatport.com/img/perform ... e.jpg"></a>

don't need all that stuff to post your track in here mate, just

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[soundcloud]http://soundcloud.com/d-velasquez/bass-is-not-optional-its-required[/soundcloud]
cool track though man, well put together and the vocal samples made me lol



if anyone wants to check out my latest track, heres it is below. feedback welcome of course!
Soundcloud

Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2009 5:24 pm
by stappard
fassyman wrote:<object height="81" width="100%"> <param name="movie" value="http://player.soundcloud.com/player.swf ... o"></param> <param name="allowscriptaccess" value="always"></param> <embed allowscriptaccess="always" height="81" src="http://player.soundcloud.com/player.swf ... ator-rodeo" type="application/x-shockwave-flash" width="100%"></embed> </object> <span><a href="http://soundcloud.com/fassyman/aligator ... >Alligator rodeo</a> by <a href="http://soundcloud.com/fassyman">fassyman</a></span>

i hope that works ^

yeah this is my first dubstep track so feedback would be sweeeeet

yeah once again on the soundcloud embedding thing, you just need the url to your track within

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 [soundcloud] [/soundcloud]
tags.

Listening to your track now, first thing thats apparent is the drums really need mixing better. The kick and snare need to be significant louder than the percussion (both audibly and in terms of level meters etc) or in the club its gonna sound like fucking salsa or something.

Like the mixing up of the wobble sound in the second drop. The whole track probably doesn't need to be so long though. The lfo speed changes are giving it some variety but even then it does seem to be labouring one point if you follow.

First song though man its not sounding too bad at all, respect for that, my first song was utter shit (and my most recent ones aren't much better). I'd recommend you give the gain structuring sticky a read through as it'll definately help a bit in terms of getting the drums and that subbass to stand out in the mix a bit better.