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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010

Posted: Thu Jul 01, 2010 8:34 pm
by wirez
S0VEREIGNTY wrote:/deadcell
Awesome sample, your initial wobbles have absolutely no power behind them and should be thickened up a lot more, second ones are a bit better.

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010

Posted: Thu Jul 01, 2010 8:41 pm
by wirez
A-List wrote: Wirez - MAN, i love it... you could easily cut it as a grime producer man. sick stuff... and as for Realise, hes decent, if hes just starting out (cant remember if you said that) then he has a big future in the grime industry... 1:50 (around that) onwards is SICK man.. good work.. i can pick no fault
Thanks a lot man, I was making Grime long before Dubstep so I'm glad I've kept my head about it :)

To confirm, Realise and me have been working together around 4 years and he has plenty of MCing experience, I agree I think he's wicked! I was just saying earlier that we're finally sorting out some decent business plans and getting things shuffling along :) :w:

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010

Posted: Thu Jul 01, 2010 8:42 pm
by wirez
pain wrote:I'm pretty new to Grimestep
Genre creation officially taking place :twisted:

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010

Posted: Thu Jul 01, 2010 8:47 pm
by wirez
Basic A wrote:Oh n @ whyrez feeling this new bit, me wants teh instrumental though haha.
Hehe no Riddim going out on this one I'm afraid bro :(

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010

Posted: Thu Jul 01, 2010 8:48 pm
by Basic A
wirez wrote:
pain wrote:I'm pretty new to Grimestep
Genre creation officially taking place :twisted:
No its not. a dude I chat with published the Gimestep EP like 2 years ago or some shit man.

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010

Posted: Thu Jul 01, 2010 8:52 pm
by mrwoof
wirez wrote:
mrwoof wrote:I'm still learning about production and would be very keen to have any feedback please. :D
You're a very naturally talented amateur in which case then, in my opinion! Big up mate :)
cheers man...thought your production quality was pretty top notch, and i echo the sentiments already mentioned about Realise...hot stuff mate.

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010

Posted: Thu Jul 01, 2010 8:59 pm
by wirez
Basic A wrote:
wirez wrote:
pain wrote:I'm pretty new to Grimestep
Genre creation officially taking place :twisted:
No its not. a dude I chat with published the Gimestep EP like 2 years ago or some shit man.
Yeh but mine actually is Grimestep lol, theirs is Brostep with a Northern donk MC! :P

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010

Posted: Thu Jul 01, 2010 9:01 pm
by reignstep
No hate on brostep please :(

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010

Posted: Thu Jul 01, 2010 9:04 pm
by pain
Basic A wrote:@Pain... the tune represents some really well though ideas, and you seem to have your synth work coming along very well man... The rhythm has alot of groove too.. my biggest critiue is that mixdown though man! The tune is squashed under a compressor/limiter and it shows... take anything you ahve on the master off, turn all your faders down to 25% volume, and then adjust again, trust me, itll be a banger once you do.

Like I said, musically, its well though out, but you have to get that mixdown right or itll never show... trust me, reduce your levels and work as quietly as you can, turn your speakers up too make up for it. Then, after you mix everything down so its as CLEAR sounding when you turn your speakers up as a professional tune is when you lower its volume to match yours, then save your tune, and turn its gain up... everything will be a world cleaner sounding!

Either way, keep up the good work man, like I said, musically, its really solid, you gotta work on your engineering though!
Thanks, I'll give the mix down another go. I had a multiband compressor on the final at the end, maybe I'll try something else this time.

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010

Posted: Thu Jul 01, 2010 9:06 pm
by Basic A
pain wrote: Thanks, I'll give the mix down another go. I had a multiband compressor on the final at the end, maybe I'll try something else this time.
If you get your mix right, you should probably be able to just turn the gain up on the mix and leave that stuff to the mastering engineers :wink:

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010

Posted: Thu Jul 01, 2010 9:11 pm
by wirez
reignz wrote:No hate on brostep please :(
NO hate my friend, just discussing the difference between Grimestep and elsewhat :lol:

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010

Posted: Thu Jul 01, 2010 9:18 pm
by pain
Basic A wrote:
pain wrote: Thanks, I'll give the mix down another go. I had a multiband compressor on the final at the end, maybe I'll try something else this time.
If you get your mix right, you should probably be able to just turn the gain up on the mix and leave that stuff to the mastering engineers :wink:
Cool, I'll try that this time.

As for this brostep, I've never heard of such a thing. I still have a lot to learn.

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010

Posted: Thu Jul 01, 2010 9:20 pm
by djwhupass
First tune. Made while learning to use Ableton Live 8. This track went through many different versions as I learned new things but this is as close to sounding as it did in my head as I'm going to get it, I think.

Any comments or advice would be great.
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010

Posted: Thu Jul 01, 2010 9:20 pm
by reignstep
pain wrote:
Basic A wrote:
pain wrote: Thanks, I'll give the mix down another go. I had a multiband compressor on the final at the end, maybe I'll try something else this time.
If you get your mix right, you should probably be able to just turn the gain up on the mix and leave that stuff to the mastering engineers :wink:
Cool, I'll try that this time.

As for this brostep, I've never heard of such a thing. I still have a lot to learn.
Brostep = racist term for midrange wobblestep

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010

Posted: Thu Jul 01, 2010 9:26 pm
by wirez
reignz wrote:Brostep = racist term for midrange wobblestep
Lmfao :lol: Best description I've heard yet I think

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010

Posted: Thu Jul 01, 2010 10:22 pm
by Plasmic aka Hanlo
3 new tracks all on a 2step tip. Rates/tips all welcome!

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010

Posted: Thu Jul 01, 2010 10:25 pm
by A-List
@ basic a - sorry man, i was writing up feedback when you posted your track, and didnt realise you posted until now! anyway, onto feedback... whilst listening, a massive bang happened in my house, so i got kinda freaked, listening to your intro and a big bang didnt go down nicely on my heart... lets start at the intro, i really like the pad type sounds you got going, and the feel of the intro is really really dark, suprisingly i like it alot... onto the drop.. im a big fan of empty drops, so this went down well with me!. The main part is really nice aswell,, i like the kick drum, nice and deep!. everything sits well together, like a jigsaw. i think thats the emptiest breakdown ive heard, but it fits so well with the song!

all in all.. i dig it man! im not really into the darker more atmospheric side, but this really suprised me.

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010

Posted: Fri Jul 02, 2010 8:44 am
by ilv1
@djwhupass

It's awesome... Especially for a first tune... The vocal samples are great but the wobbles sound a bit amateur-ish...

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010

Posted: Fri Jul 02, 2010 1:21 pm
by wirez
Plasmic aka Hanlo wrote:3 new tracks all on a 2step tip. Rates/tips all welcome!
You're a joker coming in here expecting people to listen to three of your tracks without leaving any feedback :lol: ava laugh.

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010

Posted: Fri Jul 02, 2010 1:25 pm
by Plasmic aka Hanlo
wirez wrote:
Plasmic aka Hanlo wrote:3 new tracks all on a 2step tip. Rates/tips all welcome!
You're a joker coming in here expecting people to listen to three of your tracks without leaving any feedback :lol: ava laugh.

Ahh just checked the forum rules there, sorrryy peeps! I'll try give some constructive feedback but I don't know how helpful i'll be haha!