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Re: Need help writing deep lyrics...
Posted: Fri Dec 02, 2011 1:42 pm
by Naan_Bread
Also I herd emogirl writes all his lyrics in a bloodstained diary with a vintage cover.
May want 2 giv this a go.
Analogue n that.
Re: Need help writing deep lyrics...
Posted: Fri Dec 02, 2011 3:00 pm
by Turnipish_Thoughts
bassinine wrote:don't explain how you feel. Explain an event in nature that mirrors how you feel. Use metaphor and alliteration. fuck rhymes.
This!
Anyway I used to do beat poetry, its sort of like Rapping but without the egotism and crudeness. I used to write a lot of what I would class 'deep' lyrics. To me its about a way of life really, you have to get into the right head space. You can't just 'write deep lyrics' because you want to. It has to come from a deep part of you, a message you want to express or a meaningful vibe you have about existence.
Play with rhymes in your head till you come up with something catchy. Use metaphor and alliteration to describe the thing. Its got to be something universally intimate to people, something people can relate to. Something archetypal and attaches its self to an emotion people in general find powerful. (Why most pop songs are about love/sex).
Its gotta Rhyme obviously and stand up on its self and have a consistency. Look at how much more powerful some of Eminem's tunes are compared to your average hiphop. Its because he's intensely intimate with the context of the track and it projects through the work.
Re: Need help writing deep lyrics...
Posted: Fri Dec 02, 2011 4:34 pm
by makerowner
Turnipish Thoughts wrote:bassinine wrote:don't explain how you feel. Explain an event in nature that mirrors how you feel. Use metaphor and alliteration. fuck rhymes.
This!
Anyway I used to do beat poetry, its sort of like Rapping but without the egotism and crudeness. I used to write a lot of what I would class 'deep' lyrics. To me its about a way of life really, you have to get into the right head space. You can't just 'write deep lyrics' because you want to. It has to come from a deep part of you, a message you want to express or a meaningful vibe you have about existence.
Play with rhymes in your head till you come up with something catchy. Use metaphor and alliteration to describe the thing. Its got to be something universally intimate to people, something people can relate to. Something archetypal and attaches its self to an emotion people in general find powerful. (Why most pop songs are about love/sex).
Its gotta Rhyme obviously and stand up on its self and have a consistency. Look at how much more powerful some of Eminem's tunes are compared to your average hiphop. Its because he's intensely intimate with the context of the track and it projects through the work.
You know this thread is a joke right
Re: Need help writing deep lyrics...
Posted: Fri Dec 02, 2011 10:29 pm
by SunkLo
Wingdings FTW. Then resample them as raster images. Have you tried word art with the chrome gradient on it? Bad man tings.
Re: Need help writing deep lyrics...
Posted: Fri Dec 02, 2011 10:36 pm
by -[2]DAY_-
bassinine wrote:but yeah, talking about yourself and how you feel is the most emo, uninspired way to write ever.
.... any better ideas? cuz, i really don't see any other way to write.
note: unsure if sarcasm, and even if not, a perfectly valid opinion. ^ serious followup question.
Re: Need help writing deep lyrics...
Posted: Fri Dec 02, 2011 11:17 pm
by Samuel_L_Damnson
Try writing in a mixture of superscript and subscript. Gives your lyrics a whole other dimension.

Re: Need help writing deep lyrics...
Posted: Sat Dec 03, 2011 3:45 am
by Phase Down
3za wrote:Phase Down wrote:Have you thought about writing a song that is about your name?
Hook us up with a preset fam plz plz plz!!!
I just downloaded Word 2012, but I don't really know were to begin..
I reckon 3za would be a good way to begin. Don't ask me where I got that from but this feeling inside me just tells me its right..
Alternatively start with "My".
Re: Need help writing deep lyrics...
Posted: Sat Dec 03, 2011 11:19 am
by JTMMusicuk
Double line spacing yo, gives your track some some air
Re: Need help writing deep lyrics...
Posted: Sat Dec 03, 2011 5:33 pm
by bassinine
bassinine wrote:don't explain how you feel. Explain an event in nature that mirrors how you feel. Use metaphor and alliteration. fuck rhymes.
2day, this was the first part of that statement you quoted me on. that's why I say it's stupid to write about "how i feel today" because it's not poetry - its just telling people how you feel.
Re: Need help writing deep lyrics...
Posted: Sat Dec 03, 2011 5:44 pm
by bassinine
and I know this is kinda a joke topic, hence why I made the statement about skrillex's songwriting being emo and uninspired. however, as a poet and a professional writing English major - i do feel the need to discuss it seriously.
Re: Need help writing deep lyrics...
Posted: Sat Dec 03, 2011 6:03 pm
by SunkLo
bassinine wrote:and I know this is kinda a joke topic, hence why I made the statement about skrillex's songwriting being emo and uninspired.
That's not a joke at all!
I think you've got this all backwards bud.
Re: Need help writing deep lyrics...
Posted: Sat Dec 03, 2011 6:33 pm
by bassinine
SunkLo wrote:bassinine wrote:and I know this is kinda a joke topic, hence why I made the statement about skrillex's songwriting being emo and uninspired.
That's not a joke at all!
I think you've got this all backwards bud.
i've bud, but nothing backwards.
Re: Need help writing deep lyrics...
Posted: Sun Dec 04, 2011 4:29 am
by 3za
Phase Down wrote:3za wrote:Phase Down wrote:Have you thought about writing a song that is about your name?
Hook us up with a preset fam plz plz plz!!!
I just downloaded Word 2012, but I don't really know were to begin..
I reckon 3za would be a good way to begin. Don't ask me where I got that from but this feeling inside me just tells me its right..
Alternatively start with "My".
I don't really know how to use word, can you send me that over as doc plz.
Also my computer keeps crashing, and I am getting pop-ups of gay porn, can anyone help me fix it plz plz plz?
Re: Need help writing deep lyrics...
Posted: Sun Dec 04, 2011 8:29 am
by 123kidd
Someone toss this mans a workflow template. Forget about spectrum analyzer.
Its all about word count.
Re: Need help writing deep lyrics...
Posted: Sun Dec 04, 2011 3:37 pm
by Gewze
InternetSlaveMaster wrote:3za wrote:Phase Down wrote:Have you thought about writing a song that is about your name?
Hook us up with a preset fam plz plz plz!!!
I just downloaded Word 2012, but I don't really know were to begin..
Lol Word 2012? You can't write shit in that bro. Apple's "Pages" is the way to go, everyone fucking uses it. (Skrillex, Deadmau5, ya know, all the greats.)
Or you can just be poor and download Open Office like a n0000b!
big up open office i write all my dubstep on there
Re: Need help writing deep lyrics...
Posted: Sun Dec 04, 2011 3:51 pm
by JTMMusicuk
Gewze wrote:InternetSlaveMaster wrote:3za wrote:Phase Down wrote:Have you thought about writing a song that is about your name?
Hook us up with a preset fam plz plz plz!!!
I just downloaded Word 2012, but I don't really know were to begin..
Lol Word 2012? You can't write shit in that bro. Apple's "Pages" is the way to go, everyone fucking uses it. (Skrillex, Deadmau5, ya know, all the greats.)
Or you can just be poor and download Open Office like a n0000b!
big up open office i write all my dubstep on there
dubstep? whos he?
Re: Need help writing deep lyrics...
Posted: Sun Dec 04, 2011 4:04 pm
by Gewze
JTMMusicuk wrote:Gewze wrote:InternetSlaveMaster wrote:3za wrote:Phase Down wrote:Have you thought about writing a song that is about your name?
Hook us up with a preset fam plz plz plz!!!
I just downloaded Word 2012, but I don't really know were to begin..
Lol Word 2012? You can't write shit in that bro. Apple's "Pages" is the way to go, everyone fucking uses it. (Skrillex, Deadmau5, ya know, all the greats.)
Or you can just be poor and download Open Office like a n0000b!
big up open office i write all my dubstep on there
dubstep? whos he?
the guy on mtv with like half hair and stubby fingers