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Re: Ninja Haiku

Posted: Wed Feb 05, 2014 4:15 pm
by particle-jim
I, Particle-Jim,
wear pretty dresses sometimes,
my fiancee disapproves

Re: Ninja Haiku

Posted: Wed Feb 05, 2014 4:22 pm
by particle-jim
Genevieve wrote:This is DSF
We don't listen to dubstep
Strictly one thirty
one thirty is wack
I dont care what blackdown thinks
dubstep is better

Re: Ninja Haiku

Posted: Wed Feb 05, 2014 4:24 pm
by m8son666
haikus are stupid
i don't get the point of them
they don't even rhyme

Re: Ninja Haiku

Posted: Wed Feb 05, 2014 4:24 pm
by magma
Tubes are still fucked up
Need alternative transport
Taking a boat home 8)

Re: Ninja Haiku

Posted: Wed Feb 05, 2014 4:25 pm
by magma
m8son wrote:haikus are stupid
i don't get the point of them
they don't even rhyme
A bit of structure
Helps with creativity
Plus it kills bare time

Re: Ninja Haiku

Posted: Wed Feb 05, 2014 4:29 pm
by m8son666
i will make one rhyme
what a complete waste of time
can't think of this line

Re: Ninja Haiku

Posted: Wed Feb 05, 2014 4:29 pm
by particle-jim
magma wrote:Tubes are still fucked up
Need alternative transport
Taking a boat home 8)
I envy you Si,
208 from Lewisham
my only option

Re: Ninja Haiku

Posted: Wed Feb 05, 2014 4:33 pm
by magma
M8son, there's more than
Iambic pentameter
Haikus poems too.

Re: Ninja Haiku

Posted: Wed Feb 05, 2014 4:36 pm
by m8son666
i don't understand
what you are trying to say
please elaborate

Re: Ninja Haiku

Posted: Wed Feb 05, 2014 4:38 pm
by magma
Didn't think you would
I used some pretty long words
Unfair on your brain

Re: Ninja Haiku

Posted: Wed Feb 05, 2014 4:39 pm
by m8son666
your condescension
is rather misguided as
your haiku lacked sense

Re: Ninja Haiku

Posted: Wed Feb 05, 2014 4:44 pm
by magma
It's a form of verse
The most common one might say
But others are too.

Rhyme is an option
But beauty is in the flow
Just ask sd5

Re: Ninja Haiku

Posted: Wed Feb 05, 2014 4:47 pm
by m8son666
beauty in the flow?
no wonder yours are ugly
perhaps you should rhyme

Re: Ninja Haiku

Posted: Wed Feb 05, 2014 4:52 pm
by Genevieve
m8son loves hippies
he sits in drum cricles daily
take a hit of this

Re: Ninja Haiku

Posted: Wed Feb 05, 2014 4:57 pm
by m8son666
my hate for hippies
is increasing by the day
i want them all dead

Re: Ninja Haiku

Posted: Wed Feb 05, 2014 4:57 pm
by Forum
In the eye of the beholder
M8son's beauty not found
He looks like turd

Re: Ninja Haiku

Posted: Wed Feb 05, 2014 5:00 pm
by m8son666
i may look like turd
at least i can count and know
how to write haiku

Re: Ninja Haiku

Posted: Wed Feb 05, 2014 5:01 pm
by Forum
You know how to use Wikipedia ;-)

Re: Ninja Haiku

Posted: Wed Feb 05, 2014 5:02 pm
by m8son666
are you suggesting
i am getting my haikus
from the internet?

Re: Ninja Haiku

Posted: Wed Feb 05, 2014 5:04 pm
by Forum
You'd never even heard of them before this thread

Shit, acting like you know haikus