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Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Fri Mar 19, 2010 4:17 pm
by masterjr
Deffiantly a nice vibe for this track, Maybe could even do with beefing up a bit with a low volume synth give the whole thing a bit more flavor?
Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Fri Mar 19, 2010 5:08 pm
by the wiggle baron
Blimey! Ive no idea what ive gone and done to this track here...but I like it.
Starts out as a plodder then...very much stops being a plodder. Think ima stick with it, but ive over listened it now and it sounds wrong when it switches up...but actually shat me up with surprise first time!
Love to hear anything about the switch up at like 3 mins or so!
http://www.divshare.com/download/10818646-434
edit: have spotted a couple of the mid range bass noises being off key...sorting that now
Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Fri Mar 19, 2010 6:29 pm
by masterjr
@Hexade those are some raw tunes youve got there nice tasty wobbles deffiantly feeling the whole collection of sounds going on this track wether you read this or not is another thing
Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Fri Mar 19, 2010 7:31 pm
by Bassmagnet
zapruderpedro wrote:Bassmagnet wrote:zapruderpedro wrote:Here's my latest:
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Thanks in advance to anyone who takes the time to listen. The old deal still stands - you review this and i'll review 2 songs of your choosing.
Duuuuude, this shit is so great while your BAKED. Your wobbles got it going on. Ill have to check it out again tomorrow for sure.
Cool man, thanks! Let me know which two tracks you want me to review.
Lets go with any random 2 you would like on my soundcloud brotha!
Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Fri Mar 19, 2010 7:31 pm
by Bassmagnet
Astral wrote:@Bassmagnet: Nice vibes, especially when shit starts happening at 1:11. Nice movement to the track, my only criticism would be that really harsh saw wobble thing that comes in 2:11, it feels out of place and a little hollow.
@Zap: I like what your doing here, but be careful about frequency range and levels, when that detuned synth comes in, your snare loses alot of its body.
Decided to work a little bit more on this despite how generic it is as I invested a good bit of time into it. It's coming along a little more.
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I wasnt too sure about that harsh wobble either, ill be looking into it after the weekend! Thanks for the feeds!
Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Fri Mar 19, 2010 8:23 pm
by martainnn
hey guys, just finished my new track, take a listen and any postive/negetive feedback would be greatful
cheers Tain
ps i cant seem to get the embeded thing to work? someone wanna help me with that lol
http://soundcloud.com/martainnn/tain-drop
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WLH8AbWpoE8
Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Fri Mar 19, 2010 9:52 pm
by the2bos
the2bos wrote:Soundcloud
this is something i started today, looking for new ideas on structure, im falling into the same ones again and again.
-max
here's an update thanks for the feedback
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Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 12:26 am
by VoteYes
nice track man, pretty heavy on the synths but it works.
Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 12:28 am
by VoteYes
Bassmagnet wrote:Astral wrote:@Bassmagnet: Nice vibes, especially when shit starts happening at 1:11. Nice movement to the track, my only criticism would be that really harsh saw wobble thing that comes in 2:11, it feels out of place and a little hollow.
@Zap: I like what your doing here, but be careful about frequency range and levels, when that detuned synth comes in, your snare loses alot of its body.
Decided to work a little bit more on this despite how generic it is as I invested a good bit of time into it. It's coming along a little more.
Soundcloud
I wasnt too sure about that harsh wobble either, ill be looking into it after the weekend! Thanks for the feeds!
I agree with the previous poster, the tune suffers a bit from the massive synth.
Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 12:31 am
by cleanexecution
here's an update thanks for the feedback
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i liked the style, if anything try and beef up your drums with some more layers to give it a heavier sound.
Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 12:32 am
by cleanexecution
heres a new track ive been workin on. its still untitled really. any feedback would be great!
Soundcloud
Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 12:33 am
by VoteYes
Mold Inpsektor wrote:Current track im working on, mad repetitive, but i like it. Let me know what i should do or where i should go. Im down to collab if anyone is.
Soundcloud
Definately finish that one man. So far sounding good...looking forward to hearing the finished article!
Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 12:55 am
by VoteYes
Soundcloud
Hey only my second ever track so would appreciate some feedback. Some real deep vibes! Cheers!
Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 4:01 am
by PUb-DUb
Hey i'm new here, just got into this new sound and i'm trying to suck as much of it in, as i can. Don't make tracks like these but i felt compelled to do so. harsh opinions needed, but the obvious things i will iron out soon. cheers ;P. The thing thats pissing me off the most is trying to control the speed of the wobble in massive, didn't come out of automation right
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Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 4:10 am
by rez pez
diggin it man, i dont even think you should have the wobble synth at :33, mess around with some sub melodies instead or try making a synth that doesn't follow a constant generic rhythm. i think what you laid before the wobbles was way more unique than the synth work that followed, take advantage of that!
Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 5:23 am
by HAACK
ruari89 wrote:Soundcloud
Hey only my second ever track so would appreciate some feedback. Some real deep vibes! Cheers!
Definitely see where this is going, so far my favorite part of your productions is the ability to represent atmosphere and samples in the right places and at the right time. The track lacks in the low end, bring out the sub, also too much space, try filling it out by getting the drums to the forefront and bring that sub where it should be.
Reference your untitled track, you seem to have filled out the sound here much more.
Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 10:58 am
by grasseffect
the2bos wrote:
here's an update thanks for the feedback
Soundcloud
I like, but I have to agree with cleanexecution, your drums could use a bit more beef.
The gated sequences are ace though.
Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 11:03 am
by grasseffect
cleanexecution wrote:heres a new track ive been workin on. its still untitled really. any feedback would be great!
Soundcloud
I love the intro in this, but I'm not too fond of the harsh bass.. it sounds a bit uncontrolled. It's your own choice of course, but I would have made this a more subby roller than this, as to me that would've fit in better with the intro.
Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 11:23 am
by grasseffect
Soundcloud
Something I have been working on for a few hours now.. Not mixed or anything, I'd love feedback.
Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 12:58 pm
by VoteYes
HAACK wrote:ruari89 wrote:Soundcloud
Hey only my second ever track so would appreciate some feedback. Some real deep vibes! Cheers!
Definitely see where this is going, so far my favorite part of your productions is the ability to represent atmosphere and samples in the right places and at the right time. The track lacks in the low end, bring out the sub, also too much space, try filling it out by getting the drums to the forefront and bring that sub where it should be.
Reference your untitled track, you seem to have filled out the sound here much more.
Thanks a lot for the feedback man! Agree with the sub, i don't actually like the sub in it and was planning on changing it. Cheers!