Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Fri Mar 19, 2010 4:17 pm
Deffiantly a nice vibe for this track, Maybe could even do with beefing up a bit with a low volume synth give the whole thing a bit more flavor?
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Lets go with any random 2 you would like on my soundcloud brotha!zapruderpedro wrote:Cool man, thanks! Let me know which two tracks you want me to review.Bassmagnet wrote:Duuuuude, this shit is so great while your BAKED. Your wobbles got it going on. Ill have to check it out again tomorrow for sure.zapruderpedro wrote:Here's my latest:
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Thanks in advance to anyone who takes the time to listen. The old deal still stands - you review this and i'll review 2 songs of your choosing.
I wasnt too sure about that harsh wobble either, ill be looking into it after the weekend! Thanks for the feeds!Astral wrote:@Bassmagnet: Nice vibes, especially when shit starts happening at 1:11. Nice movement to the track, my only criticism would be that really harsh saw wobble thing that comes in 2:11, it feels out of place and a little hollow.
@Zap: I like what your doing here, but be careful about frequency range and levels, when that detuned synth comes in, your snare loses alot of its body.
Decided to work a little bit more on this despite how generic it is as I invested a good bit of time into it. It's coming along a little more.
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here's an update thanks for the feedbackthe2bos wrote:Soundcloud
this is something i started today, looking for new ideas on structure, im falling into the same ones again and again.
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nice track man, pretty heavy on the synths but it works.martainnn wrote:hey guys, just finished my new track, take a listen and any postive/negetive feedback would be greatful![]()
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ps i cant seem to get the embeded thing to work? someone wanna help me with that lol![]()
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I agree with the previous poster, the tune suffers a bit from the massive synth.Bassmagnet wrote:I wasnt too sure about that harsh wobble either, ill be looking into it after the weekend! Thanks for the feeds!Astral wrote:@Bassmagnet: Nice vibes, especially when shit starts happening at 1:11. Nice movement to the track, my only criticism would be that really harsh saw wobble thing that comes in 2:11, it feels out of place and a little hollow.
@Zap: I like what your doing here, but be careful about frequency range and levels, when that detuned synth comes in, your snare loses alot of its body.
Decided to work a little bit more on this despite how generic it is as I invested a good bit of time into it. It's coming along a little more.
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Definately finish that one man. So far sounding good...looking forward to hearing the finished article!Mold Inpsektor wrote:Current track im working on, mad repetitive, but i like it. Let me know what i should do or where i should go. Im down to collab if anyone is.
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Definitely see where this is going, so far my favorite part of your productions is the ability to represent atmosphere and samples in the right places and at the right time. The track lacks in the low end, bring out the sub, also too much space, try filling it out by getting the drums to the forefront and bring that sub where it should be.ruari89 wrote:Soundcloud
Hey only my second ever track so would appreciate some feedback. Some real deep vibes! Cheers!
I like, but I have to agree with cleanexecution, your drums could use a bit more beef.the2bos wrote: here's an update thanks for the feedback
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I love the intro in this, but I'm not too fond of the harsh bass.. it sounds a bit uncontrolled. It's your own choice of course, but I would have made this a more subby roller than this, as to me that would've fit in better with the intro.cleanexecution wrote:heres a new track ive been workin on. its still untitled really. any feedback would be great!
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Thanks a lot for the feedback man! Agree with the sub, i don't actually like the sub in it and was planning on changing it. Cheers!HAACK wrote:Definitely see where this is going, so far my favorite part of your productions is the ability to represent atmosphere and samples in the right places and at the right time. The track lacks in the low end, bring out the sub, also too much space, try filling it out by getting the drums to the forefront and bring that sub where it should be.ruari89 wrote:Soundcloud
Hey only my second ever track so would appreciate some feedback. Some real deep vibes! Cheers!
Reference your untitled track, you seem to have filled out the sound here much more.