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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010
Posted: Tue May 18, 2010 12:04 pm
by wirez
Easy all, got a new bit... Track number 2 on my Short Circuit EP but 3rd track to be promoted from it (so check out the other two if you haven't already

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All you Soundcloud users, which I guess most of you are... Leave me a Soundcloud comment.
Big ups!!
Soundcloud
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010
Posted: Tue May 18, 2010 1:01 pm
by noctonal
@wirez
Nice, melodic step Heh
First off, I really like what you did to the Amen break! Sounds great, but I think maybe consider chucking another kick over the top of the break to give it some balls, maybe compress and side chain the basses to it (its personal preference though to be honest).
I really like you use of effects in the build up during the middle also, keeps it interesting, panning is cool

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All in all wicked track, beautiful melody, would definately have that track for the end of the night.
Peace.
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010
Posted: Tue May 18, 2010 1:09 pm
by wirez
noctonal wrote:@wirez
Nice, melodic step Heh
First off, I really like what you did to the Amen break! Sounds great, but I think maybe consider chucking another kick over the top of the break to give it some balls, maybe compress and side chain the basses to it (its personal preference though to be honest).
I really like you use of effects in the build up during the middle also, keeps it interesting, panning is cool

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All in all wicked track, beautiful melody, would definately have that track for the end of the night.
Peace.
Thanks man, appreciate the feedback.

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010
Posted: Tue May 18, 2010 1:25 pm
by noctonal
@Holda
Big tune mate, I don't think I can post any crits, production sounds lovely, really love the wobble youve got on the bass only letting it through at certain time.
Cool style/sound you've got going there mate

- Can't wait to hear more.
Peace.
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010
Posted: Tue May 18, 2010 1:35 pm
by noctonal
@Imperial
Woah mate, that brings back some memories

Some old school console sounds there haha.
I thought my monitors were going to break at some points but its just the distortion on the actual bass, sounds like the same type I get if I turn my monitors up too loud heh.
The bassline is sick though yeh, but I'd tweak the dist a bit, thats just my preference though, probably because I get scared every time I hear it lol

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Big track though mate, glitchy and filthy, and I love that stuff.
Check out my new filth tune please
Soundcloud
Feedbacks always appreciated - I'll try my best to check back and return the favour on your tracks.
Peace.
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010
Posted: Tue May 18, 2010 1:37 pm
by GEE
Soundcloud
Tell me what you think
im 15 this is the first track ive made tell me what you think be honest please

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010
Posted: Tue May 18, 2010 2:21 pm
by JBE
So I think this is pretty much the first track I've ever allowed myself to at least think it's finished. I got off work this morning with intentions to do more with it but all I did was sit there and listen and stare at it for like 2 hours. Just couldn't come up with anything. All I did was spend like 5 minutes messing with the eq on the snare and kick to bring it out more. I probably added a new effect to something since I just can't help myself when it comes to trying every effect plugin I have on my sounds, but I don't remember.
I guess I just hit my limitations of my current knowledge and experience. Which is only like 3 months worth, but I learned a hell of a lot more in the process of working on this and reading all the informational threads on DSF. So thanks to all the great people on this forum that put in the time to help everyone else.
Track is in the sig.
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010
Posted: Tue May 18, 2010 2:35 pm
by noctonal
@JBE
Cool tune mate, very spacey and dubby. I like it. Nice work.
Peace.
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010
Posted: Tue May 18, 2010 3:45 pm
by frank grimes jr.
@JBE- IMO the hoover bass around 1:04 is out of place. Good work other wise! Keep at it.
Here is something I finished last month, please be brutal.
Soundcloud
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010
Posted: Tue May 18, 2010 5:12 pm
by Holda
noctonal wrote:@Holda
Big tune mate, I don't think I can post any crits, production sounds lovely, really love the wobble youve got on the bass only letting it through at certain time.
Cool style/sound you've got going there mate

- Can't wait to hear more.
Peace.
cheers man, i dont think ive heard any dubstep in that kind of style so i thought id make one

hopefully i should make more like it
Big Ups, Holda x
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010
Posted: Tue May 18, 2010 5:57 pm
by noctonal
@frank grimes jr.
Another nice chilled dubstep ting.
Ermm as for brutality probably just personal preference, the blip you use with the snare, I wouldnt use it on the same hit as the snare and I'd probs turn it down a bit,tracks a little repetitive but meh, so are mine.
Good work.
Peace.
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010
Posted: Tue May 18, 2010 7:25 pm
by Code Zero
Hi all,
Made this one in 24h, i'm stuck on it, so i declared it finished!
Soundcloud
Feedback welcome
cheers
CZ
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010
Posted: Tue May 18, 2010 8:03 pm
by djwom
@ Whyrez - loving the amen break in this track, i love amen in dubstep, guess thats why skream - lightning got me hooked!

Bigups
@JBE - The synth work in this track is sweet! Nice work
@Holda - Origional sound, like the bass rise up inbetween the chords.
Soundcloud
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010
Posted: Tue May 18, 2010 9:46 pm
by An Expresso
can i get any feedback on this song please?
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010
Posted: Tue May 18, 2010 10:46 pm
by phrex
Soundcloud
my latest track. tell me what you think about it.
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010
Posted: Tue May 18, 2010 11:09 pm
by DubSac
Ez all!
This is another track from ma forthcomin EP on Imperative recordings, feedback would be great!
Everyone on soundcloud, comments are really appreciated- check out the other track for the ep as well on ma soundcloud page (safe mode)
SAFE!
Soundcloud
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010
Posted: Tue May 18, 2010 11:17 pm
by wirez
What's going on with the feedback before posting these days?
@ Vulva and Expresso, not Dubsac
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010
Posted: Tue May 18, 2010 11:19 pm
by DubSac
am i being yelled at? i cant tell, haha
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010
Posted: Tue May 18, 2010 11:21 pm
by DubSac
nevermind.. got it
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010
Posted: Tue May 18, 2010 11:50 pm
by phrex
wirez wrote:What's going on with the feedback before posting these days?
@ Vulva and Expresso, not Dubsac

you are right!
will do that tomorrow when i'm at the studio again!

(hold your feedback till tomorrow

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