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Posted: **Tue Oct 02, 2012 4:57 pm**

^ Loving the layers and details in that tune, kind of feel that some of the hits stop too abruptly but i imagine that's the sound you were going for. Kind of gets a bit repetitive around the 4 minute mark for me. Good stuff, look forward to see where you take it (sorry for bad crit!)

Posted: **Tue Oct 02, 2012 10:32 pm**

Thanks for the criticism, I changed up a few things to make it not so repetitive I'm the final version. Also, when you say hits, do you mean claps or bass hits?

Posted: **Tue Oct 02, 2012 11:03 pm**

went in with a familliar sounding dnb thing, would love some feedback...

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Posted: **Tue Oct 02, 2012 11:29 pm**

^link broked

Posted: **Wed Oct 03, 2012 7:23 am**

oops

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there we go...

Posted: **Wed Oct 03, 2012 10:09 am**

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a bit noisier than my usual crap

Posted: **Wed Oct 03, 2012 10:43 pm**

blank, really fucking cool track dude. i think the sub may be a bit too loud though judging only from my headphones. could be wrong

Posted: **Fri Oct 05, 2012 7:01 pm**

nu one yeh

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Posted: **Sun Oct 07, 2012 10:30 am**

Been a while since I posted anything here. Remix I have attempted, any criticisms welcome. Out to my hoes in different postcodes

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Posted: **Sun Oct 07, 2012 5:08 pm**

Gewze wrote:Soundcloud

a bit noisier than my usual crap

That's a large track! On the mid (?) synth (?) line, the granular sounding thing, it might be nice if you emphasise the higher freqs on that and turn down the mids on it a teeny bit. Kind of sound a bit muddy at the moment to me.

I like where i'm going with this track, i just don't know where that is and how to get there! Something is missing but i don't know what.
Very rough draft, just got the basic ideas down, the drum editing needs a bit of cleaning up and is kind of distracting now i'm listening back on the soundcloud.
But anyhow, i appreciate any crit or advice, fanks

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Posted: **Sun Oct 07, 2012 5:16 pm**

idontreallygiveashit - could maybe do with a little sub to give it some more weight and maybe some more distortion on the chords. sounding good though!

icanicant - love the drums in that, well nice sounds

tunabomber - proper solid tune, love the bass synth sound

Posted: **Sun Oct 07, 2012 5:59 pm**

I can't get the sub to sit right in the mix... good call on the added disto though!

Posted: **Sun Oct 07, 2012 6:03 pm**

idontreallygiveashit wrote:I can't get the sub to sit right in the mix... good call on the added disto though!

no worries! could maybe layer an 808 or something behind the kick?

Posted: **Mon Oct 08, 2012 12:04 am**

idontreallygiveashit wrote:
Gewze wrote:Soundcloud

a bit noisier than my usual crap

That's a large track! On the mid (?) synth (?) line, the granular sounding thing, it might be nice if you emphasise the higher freqs on that and turn down the mids on it a teeny bit. Kind of sound a bit muddy at the moment to me.

Thankyou man