yeah my kick is like a bongo in the intro, then its layered with an actuall kick after the drop. cheers for the feedback ive already changed a couple of things and its sounding better
@styv - yeah i agree with lordbid...also that hat is way to loud. big up tha sheffield manz innit
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
Posted: Thu May 13, 2010 6:50 pm
by Imperial
@Styv love the build up, could of varied the wobbles a bit but overall good, also maybe varying that piano riff, it gets a bit repetetive after a while
@fassyman not really feeling this one to be honest, im not just up for complicated riffs and breaks but i like a tune that keeps me interested and makes me want to play it over and over again, overall its a bit boring
kk will do some more feedback when other people upload something cos the ones already uploaded have got feedback already
and for whoevers interested ive got a tune ive been working on 4 a bit now, people are gonna hate cos it more towards datsik's and excision's style of dubstep
anyway feedback is much apprieciated and returned
big upp!!
i gave some feedback on some earlier tracks but mine kinda got missed out so any more thoughts on this appreciated! Soundcloud
kinda 2step garage vibe, some nice synths n chopped vocals. its not mixed properly yet, how does the sub bass sound? and is the side chain too much? never tried to before so just learning how to use it effectively! will leave feedback on others! cheers
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
Posted: Thu May 13, 2010 7:29 pm
by a.paul
@kontigobeats Thanks for the feedback, I'm really liking the choppyness to the track and the vocal sample fits REALLY well. love the synth work too!
A clip of some pure Cheese. Needs alot of work but let me know what you think
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
Posted: Thu May 13, 2010 7:47 pm
by jaspervc
@We Bang: Put some work in that and it's gonna be a banger.. Love the cheese ^^
So... Working on some DnB, hope you feedback that to Soundcloud
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
Posted: Thu May 13, 2010 10:00 pm
by carsonac
Soundcloud
Been working on this for a couple weeks. I changed up the clicks in the song cause they were a little much, just too lazy to put that version up. but any feedback is much appreciated.
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
Posted: Thu May 13, 2010 11:38 pm
by wabble
New T00N!!
Only like 30min innit but I like where its going... needs to be filled in a bit and mind this is also a headph ne mix and no limiting.. Soundcloud
Timed feedback and constructive criticism welcome and appreciated.
-Wabble
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
Posted: Fri May 14, 2010 9:02 am
by cleanexecution
Whuzzcrackin my fellow steppaz, this a tune ive been workin on for a bit.. almost near completion. i feel like i got a good balance of sub in the track and some solid kicks, the wobbles are still up for changing.. more of an excision/datsik type of a track. ill get back on the reviews soon, just wanted to post this up super quick. any feedback is muuch appreciated!
Yo dude, that sounds pretty cool man. The intro didn't really grab my attention tho but man you got some dirty low end in there I'm lovin it. That one bass sound in there sounds like its getting pushed too hard or something like you can hear some air or something with it thats taking away from the crispness. But good goin man diggin it
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
Posted: Fri May 14, 2010 7:43 pm
by a.paul
Soundcloud
still not sure about the bass line, i added some variation for the second drop(any suggestions). added reverb to sax.
i extended it abit, but still not happy!
any ideas?
feedback is appreciated!
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
Posted: Sat May 15, 2010 10:00 am
by mandis
Few nights ago i was blazing outside with my friend and we saw some crazy lights in the sky. I got hugely inspired and this is what came out that night! The track is still in the making, just after one session of production.
hey people.. this is my first post on these forums, been reading them for a little while now though
but anyway, ive just finished a little session and came out with this 32bar loop (completely having writers block when trying to create an into so i just uploaded the main part) would love some feedback on it!
also, i have just finished a remix of cellardore - Step down.. and i would love opinions on this track, im not sure if its finished or not.. some parts of the song get really repetative... but anyway