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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Posted: Thu May 13, 2010 5:38 pm
by fassyman
yeah my kick is like a bongo in the intro, then its layered with an actuall kick after the drop. cheers for the feedback ive already changed a couple of things and its sounding better

@styv - yeah i agree with lordbid...also that hat is way to loud. big up tha sheffield manz innit

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Posted: Thu May 13, 2010 6:50 pm
by Imperial
@Styv love the build up, could of varied the wobbles a bit but overall good, also maybe varying that piano riff, it gets a bit repetetive after a while

@fassyman not really feeling this one to be honest, im not just up for complicated riffs and breaks but i like a tune that keeps me interested and makes me want to play it over and over again, overall its a bit boring :(

kk will do some more feedback when other people upload something cos the ones already uploaded have got feedback already

and for whoevers interested ive got a tune ive been working on 4 a bit now, people are gonna hate cos it more towards datsik's and excision's style of dubstep
anyway feedback is much apprieciated and returned :)
big upp!!

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oh and trust me the 2nd drop is worth waiting for :)

imperial

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Posted: Thu May 13, 2010 7:07 pm
by kontigobeats
i gave some feedback on some earlier tracks but mine kinda got missed out so any more thoughts on this appreciated!
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kinda 2step garage vibe, some nice synths n chopped vocals. its not mixed properly yet, how does the sub bass sound? and is the side chain too much? never tried to before so just learning how to use it effectively! will leave feedback on others! cheers

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Posted: Thu May 13, 2010 7:29 pm
by a.paul
@kontigobeats Thanks for the feedback, I'm really liking the choppyness to the track and the vocal sample fits REALLY well. love the synth work too!

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Posted: Thu May 13, 2010 7:31 pm
by WeBang
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A clip of some pure Cheese. Needs alot of work but let me know what you think

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Posted: Thu May 13, 2010 7:47 pm
by jaspervc
@We Bang: Put some work in that and it's gonna be a banger.. Love the cheese ^^

So... Working on some DnB, hope you feedback that to ;)
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Posted: Thu May 13, 2010 10:00 pm
by carsonac
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Been working on this for a couple weeks. I changed up the clicks in the song cause they were a little much, just too lazy to put that version up. but any feedback is much appreciated.

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Posted: Thu May 13, 2010 11:38 pm
by wabble
New T00N!!
Only like 30min innit but I like where its going... needs to be filled in a bit and mind this is also a headph :e: ne mix and no limiting..
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Timed feedback and constructive criticism welcome and appreciated. :t:
-Wabble

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Posted: Fri May 14, 2010 9:02 am
by cleanexecution
Whuzzcrackin my fellow steppaz, this a tune ive been workin on for a bit.. almost near completion. i feel like i got a good balance of sub in the track and some solid kicks, the wobbles are still up for changing.. more of an excision/datsik type of a track. ill get back on the reviews soon, just wanted to post this up super quick. any feedback is muuch appreciated!

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Posted: Fri May 14, 2010 9:33 am
by Sirius
something ive bin playing with the last coupla days. if ya like it deep have a listen!! chea
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im capped at the mo... 2 1/2 hours till midnight & ma broadband kicks in, i leave my comments till then so i can load the tracks in less than 5mins :wink:

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Posted: Fri May 14, 2010 2:08 pm
by reignstep
@Sirius : Loving the vibe man, great WIP you should finish this for sure! Love the organ you bring in around 2.00 , bigups!

@Cleanexecution: well such a short track there isn't much to say, i like your bass and yeah post it again when it's longer :p

@wabble: got a cool wobble going on, needs more power tho. the snare's pretty nice.

@carsonac: awesome stuff, i get the feeling you made your breakdown too early, just keep the flow going !

WIP of me, again more of the heavy bass kind:

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Posted: Fri May 14, 2010 3:18 pm
by Warrenwheedle
Hollllla! Check here for some Dubterlude! play this when you want to mix up your set a bit slow it down and make people go Huh

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Posted: Fri May 14, 2010 3:31 pm
by obri3n

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Posted: Fri May 14, 2010 3:46 pm
by Warrenwheedle
obri3n wrote:Soundcloud

Obri3n : dude that track is sick nice production too !

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Posted: Fri May 14, 2010 4:19 pm
by Imperial
i posted some feedback at the top of this page and id love some feedback on my tune, think it got missed out but ahhh well

its called invasion, it features in my new minimix on youtube for whoevers interested and its pretty dirty :)

big up!

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2nd tune in this:


Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Posted: Fri May 14, 2010 4:46 pm
by Warrenwheedle
@ Imperial


Yo dude, that sounds pretty cool man. The intro didn't really grab my attention tho but man you got some dirty low end in there I'm lovin it. That one bass sound in there sounds like its getting pushed too hard or something like you can hear some air or something with it thats taking away from the crispness. But good goin man diggin it

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Posted: Fri May 14, 2010 7:43 pm
by a.paul
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still not sure about the bass line, i added some variation for the second drop(any suggestions). added reverb to sax.
i extended it abit, but still not happy!
any ideas?
feedback is appreciated!

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Posted: Sat May 15, 2010 10:00 am
by mandis
Few nights ago i was blazing outside with my friend and we saw some crazy lights in the sky. I got hugely inspired and this is what came out that night! The track is still in the making, just after one session of production.

http://soundcloud.com/mandis/dropa

Any thoughs appreciated!

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Posted: Sat May 15, 2010 11:29 am
by A-List
hey people.. this is my first post on these forums, been reading them for a little while now though

but anyway, ive just finished a little session and came out with this 32bar loop (completely having writers block when trying to create an into so i just uploaded the main part) would love some feedback on it!

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also, i have just finished a remix of cellardore - Step down.. and i would love opinions on this track, im not sure if its finished or not.. some parts of the song get really repetative... but anyway

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thanks

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Posted: Sat May 15, 2010 1:06 pm
by kontigobeats
@a- List thought that remix was sounding quite nice, but that bassline is too grating for my tastes but until that i was liking it, keep at it!

heres updated version of mine: some garage 2 step vibes, some nice synths and vocal chops, its not mixed yet but lemme know what you think?

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