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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Nov 25, 2009 10:02 pm
by CollisionCourse
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Nov 25, 2009 10:59 pm
by Muzzah
CollisionCourse wrote:
anyone?
Pretty cool man. Liking the sub although sometimes it somehow sounds out of key.
I think I wanna hear more FX bits to keep it interesting. I'm pretty sure there is a sub note out of key. It's worth putting it up a couple of octaves temporarily to make sure.
Interesting tune name. You been watching black hole documentaries?

Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Nov 26, 2009 11:09 am
by brettheaslewood
Soundcloud
3rd/4th time into reason, 2nd track made within it

Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Nov 26, 2009 11:36 am
by thierry_le_dj
just finish this track .:TEZZABYTES:. feed back would be great track is in signature
thanks
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Nov 26, 2009 1:41 pm
by naus
Hi Peeps - There's some new bits that i have uploaded on my myspace page, come listen

- Lemmie know how you feel about them. Peace!!
www.myspace.com/naususn
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Nov 26, 2009 7:34 pm
by rapsag111
brettheaslewood: awesome, riffs like that are the shit, what did you use to make the bass ?
thierry_le_dj: the part at 1:22 sounds like some bad sidechaining going on or something, and the part at 2:33 sounds a bit too saturated on my speakers... all in all not bad, a little repetitive but danceable
naus: you got some good ambient stuff going on there i like it, except the hi hats on trunk8 sound like they're on a one bar loop and sounds annoying if i think about it, or maybe i should just be focusing on the melodies on not nitpicking the minor rythmic elements lol
...and I never got any feedback on my song yet (in my sig)

Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Nov 26, 2009 8:23 pm
by CollisionCourse
Muzzah wrote:CollisionCourse wrote:
anyone?
Pretty cool man. Liking the sub although sometimes it somehow sounds out of key.
I think I wanna hear more FX bits to keep it interesting. I'm pretty sure there is a sub note out of key. It's worth putting it up a couple of octaves temporarily to make sure.
Interesting tune name. You been watching black hole documentaries?

i knew id heard that term somewhere before
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Nov 26, 2009 9:18 pm
by dark elixir
Soundcloud
this is a great idea there is some great tunes on here

Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Nov 27, 2009 1:59 am
by zonetrooper5
New song up on my myspace called Heavy Rain, give it a listen and tell me what you think.
http://www.myspace.com/blindedwarlords
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Nov 27, 2009 1:02 pm
by naus
Nice track bro! I like the minimal sound you got going on. In my personal opinion, some low sub and maybe a few stabs would bring it to life abit more.
Nice one!!

Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Nov 27, 2009 1:09 pm
by Raze
brettheaslewood wrote:Soundcloud
3rd/4th time into reason, 2nd track made within it

I'm liking the live style samples for the drums man, but some of the synths sound a bit thin... maybe a bit more low-mid range in?
i love the synth work from 1:38 onwards.. very melodic
not too sure about the popping noise... its a bit loud in the mix and jarring
possibly a too compressed aswell but i'm not an expert on compression
thierry_le_dj wrote:just finish this track .:TEZZABYTES:. feed back would be great track is in signature
thanks
ahhhh mate
that bassline is sweet as but i feel it needs more variation
modulate a cut off that progresses
or some pads... just to give it a bit of depth
the bass that comes in at 2:34 sounds a bit fluffy though like its been limited too much?
dark elixir wrote:Soundcloud
this is a great idea there is some great tunes on here

moody as fuck man

i'm on that
i think the midrange bit that repeats needs a bit more bite though, only a little as i'm feeling the bassline vibe but the mids feel a little too sparse you know?
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Nov 27, 2009 1:41 pm
by dj.c.jay
this one is finished I think
Soundcloud
Please leave feedback
cheers, C.Jay
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Nov 27, 2009 1:45 pm
by brettheaslewood
Raze wrote:brettheaslewood wrote:Soundcloud
3rd/4th time into reason, 2nd track made within it

I'm liking the live style samples for the drums man, but some of the synths sound a bit thin... maybe a bit more low-mid range in?
i love the synth work from 1:38 onwards.. very melodic
not too sure about the popping noise... its a bit loud in the mix and jarring
possibly a too compressed aswell but i'm not an expert on compression
cheers for the words man, as i was listnening to it yesterday, i did notice the glitch pop noise, was too loud in the mix, so that's gotta be taken out.
and i agree with you that i need to re-eq the synths

thanks for the words bro!
i'm really feeling that sickness track! what DAW you using? safe
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Nov 27, 2009 2:39 pm
by Raze
i use ableton live with vanguard and waveform samples
i've got massive but never use it...
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Nov 27, 2009 2:48 pm
by naus
dj.c.jay wrote:this one is finished I think
Soundcloud
Please leave feedback
cheers, C.Jay
yeh man really like this one. Maybe some sort of breakdown somewhere would add something ... really ggod though i love ir!!
Big up!
feel free to listen to my sig track n let me know whet you think. Thanks
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Nov 27, 2009 3:34 pm
by j_one
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Nov 27, 2009 5:00 pm
by flownLess
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Nov 27, 2009 5:16 pm
by tripwire22
i got u son. but offer some feedback for me
sounds like murder not gonna lie to u lol killing robots and shit reminds me faintly of some Vex'd song
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Nov 27, 2009 5:35 pm
by flownLess
@ tipwire 22
sounds good but maybe you should put the bass a bit more up front,
add some variation and you're done. the overall feel of the track is eerie, which gives it an original touch.
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Nov 27, 2009 6:29 pm
by dj.c.jay
naus - lovin the piano on the game. its got a real vintage sound to it too with a nice vynil crackle on