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Hey there. I never get advice from you bastards, but putting it in here anyway. Any advice will be returned! Promise! <3

EDIT: By the way - cynical, that track is a fucking baaaaanger. Think I could jump on and get a 320?

hi all, this is my first dubstep track(i think it's dubstep) so i would like you to comment and tell me if something's not quite right...

so here we go

5k1LLz - TanjaK vs RoR
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posted a bunch of my tunes in the dub forum but thought id post this one here and if people liked it they could browse my other uploaded tunes... I'm mostly a hip hop guy but always been into synths and been doing dubstep production lately..Feel free to hit me up if you want vocals on a downtempo hip hop tune... for examples of my style check myspace.com/emceeable

Able8 wrote:Soundcloud

posted a bunch of my tunes in the dub forum but thought id post this one here and if people liked it they could browse my other uploaded tunes... I'm mostly a hip hop guy but always been into synths and been doing dubstep production lately..Feel free to hit me up if you want vocals on a downtempo hip hop tune... for examples of my style check myspace.com/emceeable

Nice track mate, I enjoyed that.

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Hey there. I never get advice from you bastards, but putting it in here anyway. Any advice will be returned! Promise! <3

EDIT: By the way - cynical, that track is a fucking baaaaanger. Think I could jump on and get a 320?

i like that, i like the synth and that drum break that comes in at 1:36 and 2:59, ive got into a habit of doing that in some of my tunes

Squalid wrote:

dj_yeoku wrote:

Squalid wrote:

brettheaslewood wrote:

cynical wrote:Pretty much finished this. Would like some feedback on how it sounds to you guys

Mstrkrft- Heartbreaker (Cynical-remix)
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really really really liking this remix! any chance of a 320, seriously, woah!

if I could get a 320 also I'd be forever grateful! Track is crazy.

agreed sick tune, 320 would be appreciated

Are you kidding? I've actually been bumming it on soundcloud haha. Release it and you've got my dollar.

I know you said you sent the 320 to all, but I haven't gotten anything yet, would be great if you could resend, cheers!

If anyone else wants it post here and I'll see what I can do http://www.dubstepforum.com/mstrkrft-he ... 17946.html

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hayze99 wrote:Soundcloud

Hey there. I never get advice from you bastards, but putting it in here anyway. Any advice will be returned! Promise! <3

EDIT: By the way - cynical, that track is a fucking baaaaanger. Think I could jump on and get a 320?

i like that, i like the synth and that drum break that comes in at 1:36 and 2:59, ive got into a habit of doing that in some of my tunes

Cheers man. Listened to the first track on your soundcloud. The bass is fucking kiiiilller. Made all my uni papers fall of my desk. Got the mixdown perfect on it.

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good track!
love the intro are you giving any 320's away?

You know charlie the unicorn? Remixed..

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btw thats a free 320 download as well

djchainz wrote:You know charlie the unicorn? Remixed..

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btw thats a free 320 download as well

Hmm i get the feeling your bassline isn't fitting in, like your LFO rate is abit off, making it not match with your drums.. i think if you'd fix that the song wud be a real banger

@djworm: fuckin nice bro, nothing to add , i went completely mental at the drop . 320 plx

@Vokkal: real nice track aswell, the flow is just perfect, you know when to change your bass so it doesn't get boring. Awesome track right there, I wouldn't mind a 320 either

here's a new of me, i couldn't get it on soundcloud so it's once again on Newgrounds:

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/293663

peace,

Reign

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hayze99 wrote:

CollisionCourse wrote:

hayze99 wrote:Soundcloud

Hey there. I never get advice from you bastards, but putting it in here anyway. Any advice will be returned! Promise! <3

EDIT: By the way - cynical, that track is a fucking baaaaanger. Think I could jump on and get a 320?

i like that, i like the synth and that drum break that comes in at 1:36 and 2:59, ive got into a habit of doing that in some of my tunes

Cheers man. Listened to the first track on your soundcloud. The bass is fucking kiiiilller. Made all my uni papers fall of my desk. Got the mixdown perfect on it.

yeah its too loud though need to edit it but cant atm as what i was using is in repair
needs some compression and eqing aswell, forgot to do it first time round

reignz wrote:
@Vokkal: real nice track aswell, the flow is just perfect, you know when to change your bass so it doesn't get boring. Awesome track right there, I wouldn't mind a 320 either

Thanks! I will wait with 320s.

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Hey there. I never get advice from you bastards, but putting it in here anyway. Any advice will be returned! Promise! <3

i dig what you have but i feel like its kinda repetitive. If your using logic mess around with the ringshifter the frequency mod on it will add some extra grim and help with the repetitiveness

hayze99 wrote:Soundcloud

Hey there. I never get advice from you bastards, but putting it in here anyway. Any advice will be returned! Promise! <3

i dig what you have but i feel like its kinda repetitive. If your using logic mess around with the ringshifter the frequency mod on it will add some extra grim and help with the repetitiveness

The mix is good and I like the melody. I'd say try shifting the wave form for the wub. A 5th formant or TX wave might produce more characterful results. Its fine as it is, just sounds stereotypical to me.

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Nice man, like it a lot. Great range with the drums - sparce and good width.. I don't have any suggestions tbh.


Here's mine - been working on this the last couple of days.

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Hey,

I just finished this track tonight, using ableton live and reason... Hope you like it and pls, feedback is appreciated:

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Much respect

2 new ones. Feedback appreciated if any.


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