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				Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
				Posted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 7:31 pm
				by 5-0-what
				joekool wrote:
nice one on the milli remix!!  it defo needs to be mixed down quite a bit, there's a lot of weird stuff going on there, but the melody line and the riddim are rock solid.  might suggest using some different drums?  the second one keeps glitching out, my connection is wack, so i'll give it more of a listen later.  
five-ohh-what wrote:five-ohh-what wrote:ok so i have a new one im working on still needs a good mixdown  and i have not decided on weither or not to use a vocal prolly gonna add some incidentals just wanting to know if it sounds shitalso which drop should be first 
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just reworked this i think its finished now what yall think
 
the breaks are awesome and the shuffle is serious.  i would say that the main problem with the mid bassline is that its way too stereo.  put it in mono and see how it feels.  also, put some subs under it man!  make they speakers flex  
 
 
ok so i went and added a stereo shaper to the bass line o my wow but no they are super loud and i have to go through and remix down the whole thing  but thank you for giving me a serious piece my games has been lacking
check this one out though if ya got a minute:
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ok im really digging this tune as i type but that   tick tick snare is a bit loud  and the main snare does not have enough presence until like 2:48  or until that tick tick goes away other then that i dig the fuck out of this tune
 
			
					
				Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
				Posted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 9:59 pm
				by Astral
				Sidestepuk wrote:Just started this, come to a bit of a stop. Any feedback, ideas, things to add/takeaway would be great. Also ideas for a sample? Thanks 

Also there is no sub bass for the second half of the song, so ignore that..
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I like the variation, things sound a bit squashed at times, maybe give a little more room to breathe.
Im really fond of this, I feel that kick is possibly causing a bit of trouble on the lower end, that dispertion tail it has (to me, this is subjective) feels it muddys the rest of the frequencies in that band. Possibly just a nice clean, LP'd kick.
my last edit before finishing and mixdown.
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It's probably had my best production quality so far so..feedback always welcomed.
 
			
					
				Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
				Posted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 11:34 pm
				by kevinbutter
				Soundcloud This is my first attempt at making something that sounds like dubstep. I haven't added any transition effects or anything. Any advice or tips are much appreciated. thanks
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				Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
				Posted: Sat Apr 17, 2010 2:43 am
				by incnic
				
			 
			
					
				Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
				Posted: Sat Apr 17, 2010 4:23 am
				by Hellomadame
				(Deleted my post since it's in finished tracks)
			 
			
					
				Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
				Posted: Sat Apr 17, 2010 4:25 am
				by weedcali
				An unfinished one. im collabing with someone from youtube on this one also.
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				Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
				Posted: Sat Apr 17, 2010 9:51 am
				by lpmovement
				I seem to be on some sort of roll atm Probly should finish some work before letting people look but this one......has to be shown and listen to Acturly quite happy with this one 

 enjoy and comment.
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PEACE!
 
			
					
				Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
				Posted: Sat Apr 17, 2010 10:47 pm
				by tripwire22
				
			 
			
					
				Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
				Posted: Sat Apr 17, 2010 11:42 pm
				by CollisionCourse
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i know the mixdown needs some work. also looking to go for a switch maybe drums or bassline for the second drop
 
			 
			
					
				Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
				Posted: Sun Apr 18, 2010 8:37 pm
				by Astral
				People should be reminded that for this to work, feedback needs to go both ways.
			 
			
					
				Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
				Posted: Sun Apr 18, 2010 8:51 pm
				by Imperial
				liking some of the content on here a lot 

big up!
little tune ive been working on, which uses a sample from that cringy old man  xbox advert- u'll recognize it hopefully 
 
FEEDBACK IS MUCH APPRIECIATED!!!!!
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http://soundcloud.com/imperialdub
BIG UP ALL!
 
			
					
				Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
				Posted: Sun Apr 18, 2010 9:47 pm
				by CollisionCourse
				Astral wrote:People should be reminded that for this to work, feedback needs to go both ways.
i did for a while then nobody else bothered so i thought fuck it
 
			
					
				Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
				Posted: Sun Apr 18, 2010 10:05 pm
				by The Phantom Banger
				Imperial wrote:liking some of the content on here a lot 

big up!
 
really really solid feedback here! im sure everyone appreciates it.  

 
			
					
				Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
				Posted: Sun Apr 18, 2010 10:32 pm
				by Depone
				Astral wrote:
my last edit before finishing and mixdown.
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It's probably had my best production quality so far so..feedback always welcomed.
 
Wow man, really benga-ish! 

 I like this a lot man, keep up the good work  

 
			
					
				Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
				Posted: Sun Apr 18, 2010 10:38 pm
				by Depone
				FSTZ wrote:hey guys...
any advice on this???
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FSTZ is a pioneer of the new wave of Technostep! 
Btw if i were a cat licking a techno ice cream it would feel like this

 
			
					
				Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
				Posted: Sun Apr 18, 2010 10:39 pm
				by Depone
				Here is a new one from me (work in progress)
Any feedback welcome 
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				Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
				Posted: Sun Apr 18, 2010 10:43 pm
				by The Phantom Banger
				Depone wrote:Astral wrote:
my last edit before finishing and mixdown.
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It's probably had my best production quality so far so..feedback always welcomed.
 
Wow man, really benga-ish! 

 I like this a lot man, keep up the good work  

 
I see what you mean about it being benga-ish, lovley rhythms. Id say those ghosty snares could do with a bit more variation in their velocity to give them a bit more realism? or something like that. Also the track could maybe do witha  touch more high end. But yeah, cool track   

 
			
					
				Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
				Posted: Sun Apr 18, 2010 10:49 pm
				by The Phantom Banger
				Depone wrote:Here is a new one from me (work in progress)
Any feedback welcome 
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The chords are really nice, but maybe a tad repatative?! Possibly room for some more variation in that aspect. The drums and percussion sound lovley and punchy, the whole mix seems to sit really well. Loving the way you space it out at 1:20 ish. Fresh vibes sir, looking forward to hearing more. 
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theres an update on the previous one from me. had a play around, changed the levels a bit, got a bit further ,
 
			
					
				Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
				Posted: Mon Apr 19, 2010 12:25 am
				by zarbanderzot
				here is a sketch im workin on.  any feedback is much appreciated. thanks! 
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				Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
				Posted: Mon Apr 19, 2010 12:50 am
				by tripwire22
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would love to hear something about this and will offer feedback to who ever has my back