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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010
Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2010 12:37 am
by wirez
tylerblue wrote:Loving this vibe wirez, nice deep feel to it. Good job!
Thanks dude, let me know what you'd like some feedback on and I'll sort it out.
JUJU_MAN wrote:Depone wrote: @wirez
"My only chrit is that that open hat is a bit too loud in the mix" (maybe do a little eq on that hat and bring the highs down a few db)
other than that the track is well done mate..
Cheers geez! Again, let me know what you want feedback on and it's there
Wikum wrote:@wirez - i pretty much agree with depone. hat is a tad loud. doesn't bother me though still sounds good. i personally would consider adding some sort of ghostly female vocal stab (or mess around with something similar). but i understand that good vocal stabs aren't that easy to come by.
[Hat]er's lol. Sorry all, it's part of that old school sound
Yeh man I see what you mean about the vocals and it's something I would have done if it was my own track probably, but as it's a remix I didn't consciously think to put a vocal on it because you do really want the attention to be quite highly on the parts from the original track...
Once again, track link my way = feedback

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010
Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2010 1:03 am
by 2ndBass
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would love feedback!
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010
Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2010 2:01 am
by Wikum
back with another one guys/girls. this one is a deep tune i started last week. i had an absolute nightmare bouncing this from logic (random pops/clicks even after i'd set my buffer to the highest settings):
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wirez wrote:[
Wikum wrote:@wirez - i pretty much agree with depone. hat is a tad loud. doesn't bother me though still sounds good. i personally would consider adding some sort of ghostly female vocal stab (or mess around with something similar). but i understand that good vocal stabs aren't that easy to come by.
[Hat]er's lol. Sorry all, it's part of that old school sound
Yeh man I see what you mean about the vocals and it's something I would have done if it was my own track probably, but as it's a remix I didn't consciously think to put a vocal on it because you do really want the attention to be quite highly on the parts from the original track...
i meant more along the lines of a stabby reverb panned type vocal for effect rather than something that's going to overtake the tune. but i understand what you mean and why you didn't use one.
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010
Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2010 4:30 am
by 7thSun
Love it man.....a bit more could be happening in the first half of the song i reckon but I really love the second part. Dreamy stuff....love it.
Here's my newest one...check it out..cheers
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010
Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2010 4:33 am
by 7thSun
Wikum wrote:back with another one guys/girls. this one is a deep tune i started last week. i had an absolute nightmare bouncing this from logic (random pops/clicks even after i'd set my buffer to the highest settings):
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wirez wrote:[
Wikum wrote:@wirez - i pretty much agree with depone. hat is a tad loud. doesn't bother me though still sounds good. i personally would consider adding some sort of ghostly female vocal stab (or mess around with something similar). but i understand that good vocal stabs aren't that easy to come by.
[Hat]er's lol. Sorry all, it's part of that old school sound
Yeh man I see what you mean about the vocals and it's something I would have done if it was my own track probably, but as it's a remix I didn't consciously think to put a vocal on it because you do really want the attention to be quite highly on the parts from the original track...
i meant more along the lines of a stabby reverb panned type vocal for effect rather than something that's going to overtake the tune. but i understand what you mean and why you didn't use one.
Love this one so much! Keep it comin...
Here's mine....
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010
Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2010 4:44 am
by Zebrakid
7thSun wrote:
Love this one so much! Keep it comin...
Here's mine....
Ill man, Its daaaark, next track you make thats anything similar though,
I would say crank it up even more, just try to get it as balls to the wall as you can on the creepy vibe.
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010
Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2010 10:50 am
by RatRaceProducing
Wikum/ Interesting stuff, very deep and progressive. the tone on the kick is a bit loud see if you can bring it down a touch. Interesting synths and melodies. Sounds farely well mixed and definately original. nice
2nd Bass/ Nice little melody. Good vibes, is a bit plain anf repetitive. But the ideas are there.
7thsun/ really interesting track. Plenty of nice sounds in here, your percussion is sick, nice n shuffly. Kick is a bit much for me, plenty of sub methinks the layer synth is a touch hollow but only opinion. Nice work eerie stuff
any comments appreciated. newest is top in my sig, !peace
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010
Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2010 12:48 pm
by wirez
Wikum wrote:i meant more along the lines of a stabby reverb panned type vocal for effect rather than something that's going to overtake the tune. but i understand what you mean and why you didn't use one.
Haha sweet man

I'll leave some feedback on your new one (on soundcloud) now!
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010
Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2010 12:50 pm
by wirez
7thSun wrote:
Love this one so much! Keep it comin...
Here's mine....
Big up mate! Will leave some feedback on your new track now (on soundcloud)

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010
Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2010 1:59 pm
by nonXero
Sneak peak at three new tracks: "Evil Mind", "Another World" and "Doom" to be released on my upcoming album "DubtroniX"
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010
Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2010 8:31 pm
by LordBid
@RatRaceProducing - Love that synth guy that comes in at the beginning, west coast style or w/e haha. your sounds have some great dynamics, lots of movement through the hearing range which I think is great. I think the snare could be a little more crisp maybe some top end on that would be nice. Otherwise I think your mixdown is pretty damn clean. good panning on the hihats. I think this song is lacking in some drive though. your drums and bass do not play as well together as I think they could. with songs like this its all about groove and right now I think this track has a great mixdown and good sound design however its overall drive seems to be lacking, that is something I don't really know how to explain very well but I think you need to remain conscious of how all your parts are acting to make the listeners head bob.
@7thSun - cool vibe from the tinkles! but once again it just sounds like your wobble guy is just playing randomly faster or slower, which does not help the groove man. Its all abotu the groove and right now the random wobbles are not doing it for me. Also I think your snare could use a little more uumphhh it just sounds like another hihat right now. Like the weird samples though.
@Wikum - I like how your sub is less continuous than normal songs gives it a kind of throbbing trance/house vibe that is kind of cool. overall it has some great vibes, cool panning and an overall stompy kind of groove. Great work lots of cool subtlety here. I cant really give much criticism its not really my style of music but I appreciate it for what it is.
Here is my track took about a month to make working on it a little every day. Hope you like it!
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010
Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2010 9:07 pm
by 6144
6144 - FATALITY
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Check this out!
From Russia!

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010
Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2010 10:20 pm
by Wikum
6144 wrote:6144 - FATALITY
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Check this out!
From Russia!

i'm liking this, wish i could listen through better speakers.
thanks for the feedback everyone.
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010
Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2010 11:39 pm
by BastionMusic
I like the drums but does the idea really deserve over 5 minutes? I'm not sure if there is enough progression
@ lord bit - Love this, crazy wobbles and tons of fills. Well done!
@universeofenergy - Wow this is way better then my first attempt! Good job. Watch the synths don't get muddled with each other when the track is played really loud
So I made this remix in response to annoying requests. I wanted to take a very feel good mainstream tune and tune it on its head vibe wise. Hope you like
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010
Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2010 11:46 pm
by Basic A
BastionMusic wrote:
I like the drums but does the idea really deserve over 5 minutes? I'm not sure if there is enough progression
@ lord bit - Love this, crazy wobbles and tons of fills. Well done!
@universeofenergy - Wow this is way better then my first attempt! Good job. Watch the synths don't get muddled with each other when the track is played really loud
So I made this remix in response to annoying requests. I wanted to take a very feel good mainstream tune and tune it on its head vibe wise. Hope you like
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EPIC!!!
SO FILTHY I WANNA RAPE A BABY!!!
YOUR THE NEXT MT EDEN FOR SURE!!!
GOOD JOB!

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010
Posted: Sat Sep 18, 2010 3:29 pm
by ResetTheAtari
New one from me in my sig, first in a month. Gonna try switching to Reason as Ableton doing my nut in just now.
Will check the rest in here tomo ... day off thank fuck

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010
Posted: Sat Sep 18, 2010 3:43 pm
by tripwire22
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The newest Kaiori Breathe and Tripwire song is complete yall so plz let me know how it makes u feel
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010
Posted: Sat Sep 18, 2010 4:09 pm
by kaiori breathe
tripwire22 wrote:Soundcloud
The newest Kaiori Breathe and Tripwire song is complete yall so plz let me know how it makes u feel

how do you always get here before me!!!

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010
Posted: Sat Sep 18, 2010 4:22 pm
by tripwire22
kaiori breathe wrote:tripwire22 wrote:Soundcloud
The newest Kaiori Breathe and Tripwire song is complete yall so plz let me know how it makes u feel

how do you always get here before me!!!

cuz im a quick little rascal
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010
Posted: Sun Sep 19, 2010 12:25 am
by dubsax outlaw
@ tripwire - really nice mellow sounding synths. i like the atmosphere of the track too nothing is clashing. cool mellow grooves!
@ kaiori - nice cool intro, i like the drop cause the drums sound really clean in the mix. big ups~
newest tune of mine
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