Dubstepforum.com

thank you man will rename genre to Donkey Pinch

Some wicked stuff being posted in here, will give proper feedback soon, in the mean time here's a grimey kinda thing I started last night, only a couple hours work so far and I still have absolutely loads to do to it, any feedback/ideas/suggestions/criticism/whatever would be much appreciated

Soundcloud

Cheers guys

particle-jim wrote:Some wicked stuff being posted in here, will give proper feedback soon, in the mean time here's a grimey kinda thing I started last night, only a couple hours work so far and I still have absolutely loads to do to it, any feedback/ideas/suggestions/criticism/whatever would be much appreciated

Soundcloud

Cheers guys

sounds good so far, the only thing is that the melody sounds kind of out of tune with the bass which comes in, idk, maybe I'd just have that in the intro and maybe a breakdown and you only really need bassline/drums for the impact at the drop- lots of nice variation in that too to keep in interesting. Feel maybe there's a tad too much reverb on the hats too (unless there is no reverb on them lol)

JizzMan wrote:been a while since I made anything 140-ish but heere ya go: Soundcloud

yeah this tune is a bit different, the constant sub pressure isn't something I normally like but it made me feel like my head was going to explode after a while- in a good way. I'd suggest you do a bit more panning though, think it would let things breath a little more. Anyway, nice one.

If ur giving away any tunes can I have them too please Lye Form


here's mine- basically just listened to 2562 Air Jordan EP and made this:
Soundcloud

hutyluty wrote:
If ur giving away any tunes can I have them too please Lye Form

Of course man - let me know which ones and ill send over some 320s.

yo huty... your tune's fresh!!

some grime and garage.

Soundcloud
Soundcloud

dididub wrote: Soundcloud

this one's sick!

vulvavibration wrote:yo huty... your tune's fresh!!

cheers man!

hutyluty wrote:

dididub wrote: Soundcloud

this one's sick!

Cheers mate.

hutyluty wrote:sounds good so far, the only thing is that the melody sounds kind of out of tune with the bass which comes in, idk, maybe I'd just have that in the intro and maybe a breakdown and you only really need bassline/drums for the impact at the drop- lots of nice variation in that too to keep in interesting. Feel maybe there's a tad too much reverb on the hats too (unless there is no reverb on them lol)

Thanks man, I think the tuning issue might be because the melody is from a sample i found, might a matter of just fine pitching it, I wanna change that bass synth a lot too, was more just using it to get an idea for a bass riff, still got silly amounts of work to do to it, agree with you on the verby hats too, will turn that down a bit, cheers for the feedback much appreciated

hutyluty wrote:here's mine- basically just listened to 2562 Air Jordan EP and made this:
Soundcloud

This is absolutely sick mate! The only things I could suggest is that the snares that come in at 1:17 could be a little brighter and the wonky chord stabs in the second half of the tune could be a little louder, other than that this tune is bloody lovely

lloydy wrote:Little preview of something i've been cooking up this week.

Soundcloud

Feeling this one a lot mate, feel the kick is maybe a tad too clicky though but still a big tune nonetheless

Lye Form wrote: another thing i have been working on:

Soundcloud

Loving this, proper meditative vibes, reckon the bit when the vocals cut away before the second drop sounds a little too stark and also maybe turn down the crash a bit, wicked tune

dididub wrote: Soundcloud

Yeah that's tough, simple and to the point, very nice work sir

BlueyTeamTom wrote:Soundcloud

up for free if you feel inclined.

This one's fucking rude man, cheers for the dl

particle-jim wrote:

BlueyTeamTom wrote:Soundcloud

up for free if you feel inclined.

This one's fucking rude man, cheers for the dl

love the drums/percussion in your grime bit, overall it sounds pretty sick, actually makes me wanna make some grime-ish stuff!

Hutyluty, i've not actually checked out the Air Jordan EP, but what you've made definitely makes me want to pick it up, just the overall feel on that one makes me want to check it out, it's definitely up my alley of enjoyment

sucesful black mens is killin it

lyre foam can u send me sum choons too ding plz ?

particle-jim wrote:Some wicked stuff being posted in here, will give proper feedback soon, in the mean time here's a grimey kinda thing I started last night, only a couple hours work so far and I still have absolutely loads to do to it, any feedback/ideas/suggestions/criticism/whatever would be much appreciated

Soundcloud

Cheers guys

get out da way

get out da way

funky's getting shot

Homeboy's got a Vinyl EP coming in a couple months....
Peep the heat @ 150 BPM bitches... https://soundcloud.com/dat1

140 jungle remix i'm working thanks to Legend4ry giving away stems.Woooooopwoooop!

Soundcloud

lloydy wrote:140 jungle remix i'm working thanks to Legend4ry giving away stems.Woooooopwoooop!

Soundcloud

This is absolutely stunning, looking forward to hearing the end product, great work

BlueyTeamTom wrote:Soundcloud

new one from myself, i've spent the last week trying to produce tracks that have a similar vibe/sound/feel to those of the early days of dubstep, somewhere in that process i made this, i'm happy with it.

I really like this, reckon it could perhaps benefit from another melodic line in there to keep things interesting though, second drop sounded large

kidshuffle wrote:rough mix on this one, been getting some decent output as of late
Soundcloud

This is wonderful

particle-jim wrote:Some wicked stuff being posted in here, will give proper feedback soon, in the mean time here's a grimey kinda thing I started last night, only a couple hours work so far and I still have absolutely loads to do to it, any feedback/ideas/suggestions/criticism/whatever would be much appreciated

Soundcloud

Cheers guys

I think this is really nice so i'm going to be a bit critical & say what i would do with this personally (might be 100% against what you are trying to do):

Sounds too clean - i would saturate shit and make everything a bit more.... grimy.
Lose the gun sample imo.
The main synth sound needs tweeking - i would make it 'squarer'. also you could try layering it (-12 -24) detuned etc, and playing with volume of each channel to give it some power - you can also play with eqs to give it movement. also layering it with distorted 808s would give it a more 'genuine' grime feel.

the clap could do with a grime snare layered on it (google 'wiley snares') or just cut snares out of old grime tunes (yeah cannibalism of genres etc blah blah)

I would work on giving it more space, slow it down, lots of edits to give interesting pauses and shit.

Gewze and i have been working on a grime tune recently too (still just rough idea):

Soundcloud

dididub wrote:some grime and garage.

Soundcloud

fuckin ell m8 would love a 320, a 430 even

Soiree wrote:Homeboy's got a Vinyl EP coming in a couple months....
Peep the heat @ 150 BPM bitches... https://soundcloud.com/dat1

interesting stuff, I feel like his "drops" are a bit weak when compared to how good all the intros sound haha, but thats just me

I don't know what I was thinking when I made this but check it if you can

Soundcloud